Traditional Art :B Me in about 3 years ~Hopefully

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Sexy Sheva, Jun 27, 2008.

  1. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    I got bored and wanted to draw me in the near future, ANIME style xD

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  2. Azure Flame Banned

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    Awesome! The hair's a bit long though. I like you better with short hair. ^_^

    Also, there doesn't seem to be a line showing where the skin ends and the shirt begins at the neck. There's just the necklace.
     
  3. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    there's a line above the necklace that is a little hard to see

    I'd rather have long hair :B
     
  4. Azure Flame Banned

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    Oh! I see it now! Also, the pinky is a little on the tiny side, altough I've never been good at hands myself.
     
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    It was a little difficult to do hands xD
    I usually draw like little oval bubbles and make it look like hands, but i tried on this one :D
     
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    That's okay, just pointing it out. As I said, I suck at hands too.
     
  7. Hissora ahurhurhur.

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    Drawing on lined paper = not gewd.

    You're better of at least using computer paper.

    Anyways, I'll give a bit of CnC~

    I can see your improving, especially on proportions~! The arm is a bit funky as how it's bending backwards a bit as it seems at the elbow. Sine you either have to be a god to do that, try bending it foreward a bit. Also, your arm need to be just a tad longer. Proportion wise, the finger tips should be half way into the thigh. Your face is a bit odd . The nose needs to be more blunt and less pointy. I like your hair~, it's cool.

    Good job and keep drawing!
     
  8. Tootsie coquí

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    ASDFGHJKL; LINED PAPER *Stroke*

    Never use lined paper,it takes away the charm of the drawing >:
    Hissy said most of it but I could add a little bit of CnC :B For example,try to draw some wrinkles in the shirt (it will look more realistic).
    Hair is too big for such a small face and draw the hair with more flow,it looks rather like glued but I have to agree,you're improving and that's good.

    Keep practicing~ :^3
     
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    It was the only paper I could use at the time ^^;
    Thank you 8D

    I'll try to get better at the hair ^^