Axel's Good Deed's Chapter 19

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Who should win? *Axel's Good Deed's Chapter 19*

  1. Axel

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  2. Xigbar

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  3. neither

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  1. Sce13 Banned

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    Chapter 19…

    “WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT? OF COURSE I WANNA MARRY YOU!†Larxene yelled.
    “But…what about the strip club?†Axel asked.
    “I’m thinking Luxord and Xigbar had something to do with it,†Larxene said.
    “Well, you’re guessing right. They can con me into anything… What caused me to pass out, when you told me to hang on to your voice?†Axel asked.
    “You inhaled too much smoke from the club, and you ended up having trauma in both lungs. They had to filter them out,†Larxene said… Axel looked at her…
    “Can I ask you something?†Larxene asked.
    “Sure,†Axel answered.
    “Why did you wake up screaming for Lexy?â€
    Axel despised the question…He looked at her for a minute and sighed.
    “I had a dream…When I was really young…the day my parent’s tried to kill me…but…Xigbar…he…he save me…So he’s…not so bad,†Axel said hesitating.
    “I didn’t know your parent’s tried to kill you,†Larxene said.
    “Yeah…I was 8 when they tried,†Axel stated.
    “Please tell me,†Larxene pleaded.
    Axel couldn’t bear the thought of telling Larxene…but she needed to know the truth.
    “I was 8 and some how, the house caught fire. I woke up coughing out the smoke, and ran to save Lexy…Once we were at safety, my father grabbed my hand, pulled me, and forced me back into the burning house…Those words will burn in my soul forever!†Axel screamed.
    “What words? Larxene asked as she put her hand on his.
    Axel starred blankly at the foot of his bed, closed his eyes, and put his head down.
    “Axel, I don’t love you. I’ve NEVER loved you. Now, as you die, you’ll see how happy, you’ll be making me,†Axel quoted.
    “Your father said that to you?†Larxene asked in shock.
    Axel opened his eyes and nodded. Larxene saw a teardrop come from his eye.
    “You’re okay. I’m here to protect you,†Larxene said smiling…
    “Larxene, you’re the only one who cares about me…and for that…I am grateful,†Axel said smiling.

    A couple days later, Axel was released…and was brought back to the organization…
    “Axel’s back!†Xigbar yelled as Axel came through the gates.
    “Do you think I’ll be hanging out with you?†Axel asked.
    “Axel…We are stupid! It’s our nature…†Xigbar said.
    “Yeah…and while I was at the hospital…I had a dream…bout the time you saved me…†Axel stated.
    “I remember that too. If you died that night…your soul would’ve burned eternally in the pit of fire from which your parent’s created,†Xigbar announced.
    “Wait…did my parent’s plan to burn down the house?†Axel asked.
    “You didn’t know?†Xigbar asked. Axel shook his head no.
    “Xemnas told me that you were going to be a future Organization Member, and he told me to go get you, and when I came upon the house…your parents were setting it on fire…†Xigbar said.
    Axel stared at him for a moment.
    “Why didn’t you tell me this before?†Axel asked.
    “I thought you knew!†Xigbar said.
    “Apparently not!†Axel yelled.
    “WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON IN HERE?†Xemnas asked as he came to the front door to hear all the screaming and yelling
    “Just telling Axel that his parent’s tried to kill him when he was 8,†Xigbar said.
    “I think he is well aware of that,†Xemnas said.
    “Nope…he didn’t know his own parent’s tried to…â€

    WHAMMMMM

    “SHUT UP XIGBAR!†Axel yelled.
    Xigbar rubbed the back of his head.
    “You think you’re tuff there tuff guy?†Xigbar asked.
    Axel got out his fire disks.
    “Bring it on!†Axel yelled. Xigbar got out his guns.
    “Stop it now!†Larxene yelled
    “Stay outta this!†Xigbar yelled.
    “Let the two fight among themselves,†Xemnas said.
    Larxene looked at Axel who threw a fireball at Xigbar.
    “What’s interesting is, when Xigbar fights people he knows, he uses their weaknesses against them…So don’t be surprised when he says something about Axel’st,†Xemnas said to Larxene.
    Xigbar started shooting bullets at Axel but he blocked them with fireballs. Xigbar then ran up to hit him with his gun, but Axel blocked it. Xigbar pushed on the gun as Axel pushed Xigbar off him with his Fire Disks.
    “Just give up Axel! Like your parents gave up on you!†Xigbar yelled.
    “They didn’t give up on me!†Axel yelled as he knelt down on one knee.
    “XIGBAR STOP! THAT’S NOT FAIR†Larxene yelled.


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  2. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    This is too good man, poor Axel being shoved in a buting buliding when he was 8. I think neither should win. I need more! :D
     
  3. ThunderOfLarxene Gummi Ship Junkie

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    this was so worth waiting for, that was great, well done yay :D
     
  4. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    omg he was pushed back into a burning building :eek: and by his own father?!
     
  5. NeoJecht Twilight Town Denizen

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    man xigbar die he mean to axel :D
     
  6. Peyton Goddess Of Love ♥

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    You are good at this.
    The story is good and you made it dramatic with Axel's burning past.
    Good job :)
     
  7. Rosey Chaser

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    I think Lexy should interfere and defeat Xigbar XD she could be mad...........
     
  8. khalidroxesnaruto Destiny Islands Resident

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    I think Xibar should win.Mostly because it will snap axel out of the anger hes in.Xibarss just trying to help.