Axel's Good Deed's Chapter 18

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Should Larxene call off the marriage? *Axel's Good Deed's Chapter 18*

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  3. idk, you're the wrighter! NOT ME!

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  1. Sce13 Banned

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    Chapter 18


    “Axel…” a voice called.

    “Who’s there?” Axel asked.

    “Axel…wake up…save Xigbar…” the voice said.

    “Save him? What happened to him?” Axel asked.

    “Open your eyes,” the voice called out again.

    Axel opened his eyes slowly to see the Strip Club on fire, everyone was out but him and Xigbar.
    Xigbar was lying in front on Axel a few yards away, and he was unconscious.
    “Xigbar!” Axel yelled weakly. Axel got up, and saw Xigar under a pile of rubble.
    “Don’t worry Xiggy! I’ll get you out,” Axel said. He removed most of the rubble and pulled him out. Axel threw his body over his shoulder and started running for the door. Another explosion occurred. Luxord was outside waiting for Xigbar and Axel to run out. Luxord saw someone running with someone else over their shoulder. When the explosion occurred, the Axel and Xigbar were blown out of the building. Axel couldn’t remember much, but he landed on the ground, in the middle of the road. Xigbar landed to the other side of the street, leaving Axel in the middle of the road.
    “Axel!” Luxord yelled. A car was approaching.
    “Axel move!” he yelled again. Axel didn’t respond. The car was very close, but Luxord ran into the road, and grabbed Axel’s lifeless body and BARLEY caught him. Once Luxord hit the ground on the other side of the street, he’d seen Axel with burn marks all over his face…and…what else? Luxord also saw a teardrop. Luxord carried Axel’s body across the street over to Xigbar’s…Luxord could hear the sirens coming and he had to get Axel and Xigbar out of there. IMMEDIATELY!
    Luxord got out his Razor Phone and dialed for Zexion and Marluxia to come help.

    *RING RING*

    “I”LL GET IT!” Lexy said.
    “Hello?” she asked.
    “Lexy?” Luxord asked.
    “Yeah, who is this?”
    “This is Luxord. Can you reach the phone to either Zexion or Marluxia?”
    “Sure,” she said. She put the phone to her shoulder and looked behind her to see Zexion studying a spell.
    “Zexion, you’re needed on the phone,” she said. Zexion put his book on the table and walked over to the phone. Once Lexy gave it to him, she walked away.
    “Hello?”
    “Zexion, get Marluxia and meet me on the other side of the street at The Cat Club!”
    “Why? What’s going on Luxord?”
    “JUST GET YOUR *** OVER HERE!” Luxord yelled, then hung up.

    Luxord heard more sirens approaching.
    “Hurry up guys!” he yelled. He could see the fire truck at the end of the road WAY WAY down the road. Marluxia and Zexion popped out of a Corridor.
    “Luxord, what did you do?” asked Zexion as he looked a the burning building with a scared face.
    “Never mind that, just get Axel and Marluxia get Xigbar,” Luxord said. He created a Corridor and helped get Axel up, gently.
    “Axel’s really bad off. Xigbar looks fine to me!” Luxord said while walking into the portal. The rest followed

    *The morning*


    “Axel…” said a peaceful voice.

    “Wake up Axel please!” said another crying.

    Axel slowly opened his eyes. He looked down to see Larxene’s head on his lap, and Lexy sitting in the chair beside him in a hospital room.
    “La…Larxene?” he said weakly.
    She looked up without hesitation.
    “Axel!” she said. She gave him a hug,
    “Ahh!” he said as he pushed her off.
    “Axel, what’s wrong?” she asked.
    “My chest!” he yelled. He put his hand over his chest. He had trouble breathing. Lexy ran out to the hallway and yelled for help.
    “Axel, you’ll be okay…Just hang on…Keep Alexis and me on your mind. You’ll be fine!” she said. Some nurses and Doctors came running in.
    Larxene backed up off him.
    “He’s got trauma in the both lungs!” a nurse yelled. Axel just slowly tried to close his eyes.
    “Don’t shut your eyes!” Larxene said.
    “Axel, we need you to stay awake!” a nurse yelled.
    “I can’t” Axel said weakly.
    “Remember hang on to my voice!” Axel heard Larxene say faintly.

    Axel dozed off for hours…

    *Flashback*

    Axel was 8 years old and his house had caught fire.
    “Mom!” he yelled scared and alone in his room. It was the middle of the night. All he could hear was the crackling of the fire. He ran out of the room to see both his parent’s gone…
    “MOM! DAD!” he yelled. Axel ran into Lexy’s room, which was barely on fire. He saw Lexy lying there asleep.
    “Lexy!” he yelled. He ran over to grab her out of her little crib. Axel looked down at her and saw her little green eyes looking so scared. Axel ran out of the house as quickly as he could. He saw both his parents standing at the gates watching their large house burn down.
    “LEXY!” his mother yelled. They hadn’t cared about Axel. Once Axel’s mother had grabbed Lexy out of Axel’s hands, his father grabbed his hand.
    “Come on,” he snipped at Axel. His father took him up to the burning house.
    “Dad! What are you doing?” Axel asked.
    “Axel, I don’t love you. I’ve NEVER loved you. Now, as you die, you’ll see how happy, you’ll be making me.
    Axel’s father opened the burning down door, Tosses 8 year old Axel inside, and put a large log that was sitting next to their porch, in front of the door.
    “DAD!! MOM!! LEXY!!” Axel yelled as he banged on the door. Axel started sobbing.
    “MOMMY! DADDY! SAVE ME!” he yelled. Axel was crying out for his parents, who completely ignored him. They saw Axel through the window.
    “MOMMY!” he yelled as tears wiped down his face.
    “I”LL BE A GOOD BOY! I PROMISE!” Axel yelled. His mother gave one last look at him, with an Evil smile.

    Axel ran over to the corner, cuddled up in a little ball, and just cried, but out of nowhere, a man appeared out of a corridor of Darkness. He was in his 20’s. He had an eye patch, long black hair with gray matched in, and a black hood. He had a scar on his eye, and spoke as if he were a teenager. He stuck his hand out.
    “Come with me…” he said.
    “What about Lexy?” Axel asked.
    “She’s fine…Come with me Axel…”
    “Who are you?” Axel asked as he got up.
    “I’m Xigbar,” he said.

    *End Dream*


    “LEXY” Axel yelled as he jumped up out of bed. Larxene was startled.
    “Where’s Lexy?!” Ael yelled he jumped out of bed, but tripped over the cords, that were hooked to his breathing machine.
    “LEXY!” he yelled. Larxene jumped down and put her and on his back.
    “Axel…She’s coming back…She had to go for a minute. She’ll be back…” Larxene said comforting him. Axel started sobbing and Larxene couldn’t help but hug him. A few nurses came running in.
    “We heard a crash, is everything okay in here?” she asked.
    “Yeah, but could you help me get him back in bed?” Larxene asked.
    Axel looked around to see a white room.

    “Whe…Where am I” Axel asked? A 2 men came in and helped Axel back on the bed, then walked back out…
    “Axel,” Larxene said. Axel looked at Larxene.
    “I’m sorry Larxene. I should’ve NEVER went to that Strip Club,” he said
    “What Strip Club?” she asked angrily.
    “The one that Xigbar and Luxord took me too,” Axel said.
    “YOU WENT TO A STRIP CLUB?” she yelled madly. Axel nodded while a tear went down his face.
    “I’m sorry…and I understand…if you don’t…wanna marry me…” Axel said.
     
  2. ThunderOfLarxene Gummi Ship Junkie

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    omg that was great, so much drama, i could read these forever
     
  3. Marluxia-rox Merlin's Housekeeper

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    uh-oh axels in trouble - AGAIN!!

    *goes 2 axel punches him in the arm*

    WHY THE **** DO XIGBAR AND LUXORD HAV 2 BE SO EVIL - TAKING HIM 2 STRIP CLUBS AND GETTING HIM DRUNK!! THEY ARE EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:mad: :mad: :mad:

    Anyways - KEEP WRITING!! i love ur storys!!
     
  4. Xx Axel xX Traverse Town Homebody

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    Whoa, that flash back was kinda... harsh. Man, I hear about parents killing their kids but that was just pure insanity... wow


    I love your stories of course too :D
     
  5. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    This is so good man, bad stuff only happens to Axel. But really good. :D
     
  6. khalidroxesnaruto Destiny Islands Resident

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    Its true.I can also read this forever.I dont care if im a boy,no matter whaat my friends say.I will still love this story!!!!!Make alot of chapters.O and one more thing "**** you AXELS PARENT **** YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:mad: :mad: :mad: :mad: :mad: :mad: :mad: :mad: :mad:
     
  7. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    This is good :)

    *cries*

    AXEL WANTS TO GET MARRIED!!!! AND ITS NOT TO ME!!!!

    *cries hysterically*

    CALL OFF THE WEDDING!!! FOR THE LOVE OF KINGDOM HEARTS, CALL OFF THE WEDDING!!!!
     
  8. Roxas- PARTYMAN MORE LIKE HOMOVAN 73M SUCK MY B****!

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    :eek: :eek: :eek: DUN DUN DUN!! THE SUSPENSE!
     
  9. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    Question: wheres chapter 17?
     
  11. NeoJecht Twilight Town Denizen

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    susspens man these things are great:D
     
  12. ThunderOfLarxene Gummi Ship Junkie

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    its under one of the stories titled chapter 7, the 1 is just missing
     
  13. Rosey Chaser

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    k thanx.. I was really confused at first. I was like WHAT