Way too jumbled up. And it doesn't even have the characteristics of a sig (sincerely). Use text in a sig like this. Also a tip: if you wanna make copies like that...make them very low opacity, not as many and not jumblred up like this. I also use copies to add effects (with motion blurs and stuff) and changing the blending modes. Even if you din get what I said :p just don't make copies like that. Edit: Oh and renders aren't really blended. I know this is like your sixth and I'm critical..but it helps make you better.
Agree with you. It's good but i think the Zexion sig it's better. Axel on the right looks smaller than the left one.
You just smudged the render.... Try to add more effects, and have the render in the middle. Maybe go crazy with filters. Oh yeah, that's always fun.
@^ Stock doesnt always have to go in the center. Try and use the Rule of thirds sometime. A concept that says That splitting a canvas into thirds and aligning the focal point at one of the thirds makes the artwork more visually pleasing than if the stock were in the middle. Anyways, on the tag... the duplications arent really helping it, and the focal point isnt really defined well at all and is much too small. if youre going to work with a stock of that size, move it to the center or one of the thirds of the canvas and crop out some of the top and bottom. Focus the Effects around the stock to keep attention on your focal point. You dont want your viewers eyes moving around and seeking more of the picture off canvas. Use appropriate lighting, and use more variations of colors in your tags. Using one solid midtone color isnt good for building depth or flow. Find a balance between lights, darks and midtones. Okay, i hope that helped.
