I drew him in my spare time:D. He's so cute in shirt:D http://no14mexony.deviantart.com/art/Axel-No-8-79014174
Heh, he looks like he's inviting the others of the Organization to a match of basketball! :3 Gotta say that in which case, Xigbar would have an advantage.. Before I cnc your drawing, I noticed that there's another drawing on the page behind the Axel one. This is because the paper is thin and that the scanner's light catched up through the first paper. To avoid that happening, you could just use a normal sheet of paper used to print out pages between them. I do that all the time. X3 About the drawing itself: It's not bad at all, the hight and wideness of the body looks pretty good - there's just minor propotion issues going on in most places, most noticable in the neck and arms. About the neck, it looks thinner than I think you originally intended for it, the shadow pretty much caused a thin-neck-ready-to-break illusion. In situations such as this, it is very wise to draw a VERY FAINT line that would be the spine of the skeleton. The spine continues to the neck, so it's easier to place it right then. Also keep in mind that the distance between neck and shoulder is equal on both sides. About the arms... that's harder to explain.... uhm, it feels like there's something missing in it.. Other than that, try adding some strokes of hair to the left side of the head as well. To avoid a helmet effect. And add more folds in the shirt, right now it looks too stiff to move around in much. :3
