Traditional Art aw! so cute kagome is having a picnic!XD

i made this while i was in the mall getting fitted for glasses.=( i turned out pretty good=D but i did copy a picture but it isnt traced thoughXD wat do u think
(good or bad comments will be acceptableXD)

 

its nice =] Her face is kind of.....yeah. Maybe making the width small, and the edge should be smoother. The cats look AMAZING and just like the original. I think thats it, just the head. But the rest is fab =]

 

XD thankyou!

 

I think the rite side of the face should be more smooth and less pointy if u no wat I mean. Other than that, it looks fine.

 

thankyou i try and fix it laterXD

 

Np, and if I can suggest, maybe u should draw a greenish field or something that'll show her in a more picnic-suitable enviroment. Just a suggestion...

 

OK THANKS FOR UR THOUGHTS!xD

 

The hands are very... petite. Compared to the size of the head they're very small. You'll want to keep that in mind.

A tip for you: there is no shame in starting out with guidelines, it will keep the propotions in place much easier. I suggest you try them out when drawing stuff. :>

http://polykarbon.com/tutorials/index.htm

These tutorials are good for a beginner to start out with, you should take a look at their advises and try them the next time you draw. :3

 

ok thanks i definatly will look at the tutorial!XD