I think this is my first poem in the poetry section so yeah, I guess tis will be where I will put my poems for now on. The Kingdoms of Blue and Black look down upon you and I. Deep abyss reach above and wide, forever running it stands. From time to time great white majesties sit upon the throne it offers. They pour upon us their wealth and shelter from the uncertainty up above. In the dawn of day the blue rules over all with promise of warming light, By dark the black claim power and offers glimmering treasures adorn above. The two kingdoms can never agree, their arguements always raging. Even making the many majesties of white fight amongst themselves, In an attempt to keep order. But after the rage of war, everything calms down and the arguments cease. The lords and ladies of the land, who look up to the kingdoms, Wear their abundance of suits and dresses, adorned with many colors. A dance held once a day, Where noble of the shall dance to the melody of the wind, While the kingdom of blue and black look upon them. The most beautiful woman in the land they say, As elegant as a angel I hear, Yet is very tall and looked up to by others around her. Wearing a dress of green, She Dances slowly to the sound while leading the other dancers around the floor, The melody of the wind playing quite loudly now. She whispers quietly, but enough for you to hear as you linger nearby, There shall be dances and wars, As long as there is the Sky. Please tell me what you think when you read tis C: k I just made tis in English today for a project. C:
I thoroughly enjoy reading poetry like this. Your imagery is so vivid, like it's happening right before my eyes. They were very creative as well. Thanks for posting this. Thank you for that. When this section is going to get cleaned up we could change the title of this thread for you if you'd like, so that it indicates that you have showcased more poems in here.
I really liked this poem.A very vivid image of everything happening in the poem. It's very pretty sounding as well.
