Ok I worked, and am working realy hard on this, so please read and reply. I hope you like it! ________________________________________________________________________________________ A young boy ran down a dark, and damp street. His breath was fast and short. He knew if he stopped he would be cough, and dragged back to the prison he had spent his entire childhood in. His dark green eyes were dilated. If he didn't get somewhere safe, and soon, he would die. The street was so silent that he could hear every step, and breath he took. His vision started to blur, and he soon lost his balance. He fell on the ground, and couldn't work up the energy to get back up. "Hey! Are you ok little guy?" A man's voice asked The boy tried looking up, but just couldn't. "don't worry little guy. I got you" The man said The boy felt two strong arms pick him up genitally. "You will have to fill me in later kid" The man said. "Oh! I almost forgot! I'm Christopher." The boy listened, but soon fell asleep. (later that night...) The boy woke up, and looked around. He was in a room that from the silence he was guessing that it was out in the country. It was dark, so he guessed that it was night. He suddenly realized that there was a man in the room. He guessed it was Christopher. Christopher was sleeping in a chair near the bed, the boy was laying in. The boy got out of the bed, and examined Christopher closely. It had been a very long time since he had seen another living person. The boy was examining Christopher's face when the he suddenly woke up, and fell back in shock. The boy suddenly backed up and dropped to the floor, trembling in fear. "Oh boy! Come on it's ok. Don't be scared!" Christopher said walking over to the boy, and putting his hand on the boy's shoulder gently. The boy looked up at him with a tear streaked face. "There there...it's ok" Christopher conferred whipping away the tears on his face. "Now...what's your name?" Then boy looked at the ground silently. "What's wrong? don't you have a name" Christopher asked The boy shoot his head no sadly. "Well then we will have to give you one...ummm...what about Matthew?" Christopher asked The boy nodded happily. "Well Matthew it is! Well you better get back to bed. We'll talk more in the morning." Christopher promised picking Matthew up, and laying him in bed. Matthew soon fell asleap.
thank you! I spent a wile on that...spell check faild me on thouse words,,,:( oh well thanks for replieing. I'll have the next chapter out ASAP
You're getting better. I'll give you that much. You still need to work on grammar. Commas after quotations. Periods at the end of sentences. Capitalize the beginning of sentences. Your spelling's improving. But, uh...it's "gently" not "genitally." Unless you're saying that the man picked him up by the "genitals"... :xp: Oh, and is this supposed to be Original Work?
Chapter 2 Matthew woke up the next morning, but Christopher wasn't in the room. Matthew stood up, and walked out of the room looking for Christopher. He walked so lightly that he didn't make a single sound. He peaked into every room, but Christopher wasn't in any. Matthew got a little worried when he realized Christopher wasn't in the house, but he was used to being alone, so he sat in a corner, and waited for Christopher to come back. An hour, or so later Christopher came back, and was more than surprised to see Matthew siting alone in the corner. "Hey Matthew...did you get worried when I you woke up, and I was gone?" Christopher asked kneeling down to his eye level. Matthew nodded. "Well I'm sorry. I had to go get fire wood, but I promise I'll ether tell you, or leave you a note before I leave again" Christopher promised. Matthew nodded happily. "Well how about some breakfast buddy?" Christopher asked with a big grin. Matthew nodded. He was very hungry, because he hadn't had a descent meal for a very long time. Christopher led Matthew into the kitchen, and they ate breakfast, but then Matthew got the consuming feeling of being watched. He looked around wildly. "Matthew? What's wrong?!?!? MATTHEW!!!" Christopher yelled Matthew was consumed by panic, and soon blacked out. "Matthew!!!!!!!!!!" Christopher yelled shaking him gently. Christopher quickly picked Matthew up, and layed him in bed. (A few hours later) Matthew woke up, and saw a worried Christopher watching him. "Matthew! I was so worried about you! What happened?" Christopher asked. Matthew shrugged. "Well I sure hope it doesn't happen again! I think my heart stopped!" Christopher said with a sigh of relief. Matthew looked down sadly. His eyes filled with guilt. "Hey I didn't mean to make you feel bad! It's ok! It's not your fault" Christopher insisted. Matthew nodded, but didn't seem convinced. "Well I have to go chop some fire wood for the fire , so I may be gone for a wile. Maybe you should try taking a nap! You had a very ruth morning!" Christopher said then left the room. After hearing the front door shut Matthew layed down, and slowly fell asleap.
Matthew woke up a few hours later to the smell of fire smoke, and cooking food. He suddenly remembered that Christopher had went to chop fire wood earlier. Matthew was sure that Christopher must be home, so he got up quickly, and ran into the next room. When Matthew got into the next room his happy smiled, turned into a terrified look. Christopher was in the room, but to Matthew's surprise, he was tied to a chair, and was beaten up badly.Two other men were in the room staring at him. The other men didn't seem kind at all, and Matthew couldn't run back into the back room he had been sleeping in, because the moment he ran in the room the had turned there attention to him. "Now look what we got here!" One of the men said walking towards the terrified Matthew. "LEAVE HIM ALONE!!!!!!!!!! HE HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THIS!!!" Christopher yelled at the men. "Well considering he is, so close to you he may be of use to us!" the second man said slapping Christopher across the face. Matthew was shocked by the pain they were causing Christopher, and ran past the first man, and right up to Christopher. He looked at the weak Christopher, and hugged him crying. "Don't worry Matthew. I'm ok." Christopher said in a gentle voice. The second man grabbed Matthew by the hair, and pulled him away from Christopher. "LEAVE HIM ALONE!!!!!!!" Christopher yelled "We will...when you give us our money!" The first man yelled "You know where to find us when you got the cash" The second man said, and then they picked up Matthew and carried him away. Matthew tried to fight back, but wasn't strong enough. "MATTHEW!!!! MATTHEW!!!!! MATHEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!'' Christopher yelled fearfully. Tears streamed down Matthews face, as he was forced away from the only friend he had in the world. "Aw! the little baby is crying!" the first man teased. "Well then lets give him a time out." the other man teased with an evil grin. "Are ones?" the first man asked. "Duh!" the second man replied Suddenly Matthew felt sharp pain in his back, and was thrown into a bag. He could feel the bag be tossed into a bag, and next thing he knew he was un conches.
Matthew woke up about an hour later. The car had just stopped, and he could hear the two men walking closer, and closer... "Well this is going to be more interesting than I thought!" The first man exclaimed. "Yeah! This kid sure added some excitement to all this!" The second man replied pulling Matthew out of the bag. "He sure is a quiet one!" "Yeah...maybe he can't talk at all." The first man suggested. "Well lets get inside." The second man said walking towards a worn down house. They walked into the dirty house. there was dirt, clothes, and trash everywhere. it was a sad excuse for a home, and it was hard to believe that anyone could stand living there. Matthew even saw a few mice run across the floor, at least...he hoped it was mice instead of rats! If the second man hadn't been holding him still he would have ran for the hills. "Hey! Tommy get out here!" the first man yelled A door opened, and a man around 16, or 17 walked out. He had green eyes, and red hair. He was wearing an orange shirt, black pants, and a black jacket. "What did you guys do now!?!?!?!" Tommy asked catching sight of Matthew. "Christopher still didn't have the money, so we took something that can make him hurry up." the second man replied with a grin. "He is your responsibility until Christopher comes to get him." the first man explained. "you have got to be kidding me!" Tommy said. "Nope!" The first man said with a laugh. "Here you go!" the second man said pushing Matthew into Tommy. Tommy was obviously angry, but grabbed Matthew by the wrist, and pulled him into another room. The room Matthew was pulled into, was a fairly big bed room. It was red with black carpet. It had a few chairs in it, a full sized bed, a desk, and a dresser. There was a full bookshelf, papers, and a radio. "sit!" Tommy ordered Matthew pointing to a chair, and Matthew sat. "Well since we can't have you running away we'll need to do this." Tommy continued pulling a rope out of a desk, and to Matthews horror tied him to the chair tightly. Tommy made sure it wouldn't come loose, and then walked over to his bed, and sat down. "So looks like I'm stuck with you until Christopher gives the lame brains there money." Tommy said with a sigh. Matthew nodded sadly. He hated this place. It was cold, and scary. It was nothing like Christopher's house! Christopher's house was always warm, and kind! Tommy turned his radio on, lade on his bed, and ignored Matthew completely. A few hours later they heard someone come to the door. IT was the first man, from before. " Christopher paid us, and is waiting for you outside." The man said simply. Matthew was overwhelmed with joy! He would soon be back where he felt safe, and would hopefully never have to see these men before! "WOW! HE ACSHELY PAID! HE HAS NEVER PAID BEFORE! HE MUST REALY CARE ABOUT THIS KID!" Tommy exclaimed in shock. The first man nodded, and untied Matthew. Matthew tried to get up quickly, but his legs gave in, and he had to rub them before he could walk. He was lead out of the horrid house, and once outside he saw Christopher. Matthew rushed over to him, and hugged him tightly. "It's ok buddy! You're safe now!" Christopher said to Matthew. "Let's go home." Christopher continued leading Matthew to his car. Matthew laid in the back seat, Christopher got into the drivers seat, and they drove away.
