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Discussion in 'Production Studio' started by Jayn, Jun 19, 2008.

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  1. Jayn ♥

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    http://www.playlist.com/standalone/38103387/yes <--Yeah. I think you know why I chose that song.


    Anyways, I didn't post it in spam/send it in PM this time because I really want a critique.
    I didn't post it in the creativity corner because it's not just a singing talent, I'm playing the piano too and would like a critique/comment on that as well.

    If this must be moved then, move away and I apologize, I just don't know where else it would go >>;.


    CnC anybody?
     
    Jayn, Jun 19, 2008
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  2. Arch Mana Knight

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    awww...:glomp: amazing as always. Never had a thread named after me...You have too much talent...
     
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  3. Marluxia13579 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Hey. I really like your piano playing, for a start. It's very expressive, good use of rubato.

    As for the singing, I really like your voice. In terms of pitch, there were a few intonation mistakes but you'd hardly even notice them.

    So yeah... really good.
     
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  4. Jayn ♥

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    Thank you ^^. The pitch is a little of my range when the song comes towards the bridge. "Twinkle, twinkle little STAR" That's where I felt like I had strained myself a little ><. But thanks for your comment and critique, I'm very glad you enjoyed the piano portion as well =3

    x3 I'm glad ya liked it! :glomp: Thank you as always Foofy-kun ^^
     
    Jayn, Jun 19, 2008
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  5. Fallout Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Wow. You're a double threat: you can sing and play piano. =]
     
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    xJayn = WIN

    ^_^
     
    Hayabusa, Jun 19, 2008
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  7. Jayn ♥

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    Thanks! I really appreciate that :3

    Thanks!

    XD! YAY!
    You = WIN too!
    My buddy :glomp:
     
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  8. Hayabusa Venomous

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    I'ma make you that Kingdom Hearts Scrubs video...

    I just need to figure out what part of what episode to use XD
     
    Hayabusa, Jun 19, 2008
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    Wow, that's all I can say. Really, I am stunned in amazement.
    I give you a great critque, in fact, I can't even find the correct critque to use because it's that perfect. Nothing can be descrfibed into words when it came to this song.
    Haha, it's a great song, I must say ... :glomp:
     
    Pistol Schoolboy, Jun 19, 2008
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  10. Jayn ♥

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    Thanks Aki ^^!
    :glomp:
     
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  11. Arch Mana Knight

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    The epicness of this song...it is too much for my punny human mind to handle. Thanks again Jayn. You made my day. I'm still a little emo right now though...
     
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  12. Jayn ♥

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    We'll fix that soon, Foofy. Feel better...
     
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  13. Arch Mana Knight

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    Maybe...I just wish...Nevermind. So how long did it take you to do this?
     
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  14. Jayn ♥

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    30mins...I think.
     
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  15. Arch Mana Knight

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    You're genious. I wish I had that type of pure skill. You're an artist.
     
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  16. Jayn ♥

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    Thanks again.<3
     
    Jayn, Jun 19, 2008
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  17. {Vena_Sera}_ The Anti{Saint} King's Apprentice

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    song is epic

    I see a star rising from kh-vids
     
    {Vena_Sera}_ The Anti{Saint}, Jun 19, 2008
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  18. Jayn ♥

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    Aw...If I ever make it big, I'll totally write a speech for you guys ;3
    Thank you!!!
     
    Jayn, Jun 19, 2008
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  19. Hayabusa Venomous

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    You could totally be the next Marie Digby :0

    By the way, I dunno what song you'd like to hear from me XD
     
    Hayabusa, Jun 19, 2008
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  20. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    XDD, please guys lets not exaggerate

    but, i cant hear the song!!!, and i really want....to....hear...it

    it never stops loading......
     
    Chevalier, Jun 19, 2008
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