Digital Art anti sora avvy

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Shinichi Izumi, Aug 14, 2011.

  1. Shinichi Izumi Totally Pink and stuff

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    whachal think?
     
  2. Kayate King's Apprentice

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    I like it. Very well made, except the white around it could probably be done better, made into something other than white space.
     
  3. Amaury Chaser

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    I think that the "Anti-Sora" text could be at the top, as well some color adjustments being made.

    However, the overall design is very nicely done, and I look forward to more.
     
  4. Ienzo ((̲̅ ̲̅(̲̅C̲̅r̲̅a̲̅y̲̅o̲̅l̲̲̅̅a̲̅( ̲̅̅((>

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    ~Moved~

    To Graphic art
     
  5. Rissy Queen of the Clouds

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    In an avatar, even though it's a small space with not a lot of creativity to put on it, but it's still a graphic like everything else! The white background is a little bland in my opinion, and the text could be better placed. The focal itself is a little fuzzy, so maybe sharpening the image all together, the quality will pick up alittle better. c:
    I really hope you continue, you're getting somewhere!
     
  6. Iskandar King of Conquerors

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    I think it's pretty good. The white is a bit much, but if you can take a little of it away and mix in something else it might work a little better, but that's just me
     
  7. Jⱥy King's Apprentice

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    I think you should go for a darker coloured background, maybe something like grey?
    Also i think the text should be closer together and not just placed wherever there is space.

    Other than that i think it looks nice and presentable :]