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  1. Sabby Sleepy Panda Assassin

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    Do I know who I am?
    Do you know who you are?
    Questions we ask everyday
    Answers that are never complete

    Who knows the answer?
    Is it you?
    Is it me?
    Only time will tell until we find our answer

    A pathway to seek the answers we want
    a long journey ahead
    Join me will you?


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    Hmm I think this poem is okay. not really my best
     
  2. Nailpolish <3 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    hehe.

    i'm glad you are writing poems :]

    that is awesome. trust me, its amazing work. maybe longer, its beautiful, make it longer xD but then again, short poems are good as well.

    all the critique i have xD. oh and put a comma between me and will, last line. ^^
     
  3. Sabby Sleepy Panda Assassin

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    Thanks Tash... LOL go read my other one
     
  4. naminestwinsister Destiny Islands Resident

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    nice poem and sure i'll join you to seek the answers lol