Realize is a temporary title, I'm not certain of it yet. Also, I might alter the lyrics a bit when I start making the music to it. As far as how it'll go vocally, I do believe I have figured it out. I'd quite enjoy some CaC With no further ado, Realize When you feel the sky is falling and rescue is too far Just close your eyes and realize It’s not at all. When you feel defeated and you can’t seem to get up Just close your eyes, and realize I’m there No matter how far, or how hard You’ll rise above and beat it It’s too soon To give up You’ve got to close your eyes and realize I am right there by your side When you feel your life is fading. and giving up seems fine Just close your eyes and realize nothing comes free No matter how far, or how hard You’ll rise above and beat it It’s too soon To give up You’ve got to close your eyes and realize I am right there by your side I’ll be right next to you when you need it I’ll carry you if you ask No matter what life throws at you Do not fear For I’ll be right next to you when you need it I’ll carry you if you ask No matter what life throws at you I’ll be there to take the pain. [No matter how far, or how hard You’ll rise above and beat it It’s too soon To give up You’ve got to close your eyes and realize I am right there by your side] [x2]
Wow. I love it. I could hear it in my head, the lyrics flow seamlessly into one another and the message is strong and clear. The main thing that you've done which most people tend not to do is not making the lyrics rhyme, which is good don't get me wrong. Most people (me included) get to certain lines and their brain jams so they throw in a word that rhymes, with this however, you obviously knew where you were going and what you wanted to say. I can hear this (in my head) with a really strong and soft female vocal for some reason, not sure why but it works. There was one part that really grabbed me which was: It's so relevant to people all over the world and it sounds like you may have experiance in this matter? Everything about this song is good, it should be on my iPod. Amazing. Keep writing and I wish to see more of you in the future. :)
Wow, Noroz, you make me slightly jealous of how good you are at this! Very interesting piece, wish I had that kinda talent. Which I've tried...But not too hard...Heheh.. And, I agree, the lyrics to indeed flow together, and I can't wait to see the finished version.
Thank you :) I often rhyme, but only if it seems to be working, I prefer to find out what I want to say first, then let the creative part of me take over, whether it rhymes or not doesn't matter to me. This will (unfortunately, I guess?) not be sung by a woman, but by myself. I've figured out mostly how I want it to sound vocally, so all I need to do now is to buy a guitar/keyboard and figure out that part. And yes, I have, as I believe 99% of everyone else, had hardships. I wrote this because of it and how I felt and thought this evening. I'll post the song on the forum as well, when it is done. Thank you :) Nothing Comes Free ;)
This is the finished product of what you showed us on msn? It is lovely. Really though,I just love the way it all flows together,the rhymings a nice touch,and I was honestly singing it to myself as I read it(I have no idea what tune I was singing though...oh my dodgy brain~) Great work m'dear,and I hope you keep it up <3
My good sir, quite an amazing song you have there! I really can't explain it, but it gives me comfort when i read it, it really speaks for itself. I think song writing is quite a skill and you did very well at it, it caught my attention, it sounded good in my head, and the meaning is fantastic. I really wanna hear someone sing it now. As for the title of the song... i think it is a worthy one indeed. I look forward to more of your amazing soul speaking lyrics, they really are great. Was there any motivation behind this song?
Thank you. I will record it as soon as I figure it all out. Might upload an acapella version to give you a little taste of it. And as for motivation, there is always motivation behind my lyrics, be it something I've been thinking of over a long time or just a "spur of the moment", so to speak. This one was of the latter kind. Started writing and finished it within 30 minutes.
