Here's a song I wrote, which pretty much sucks. Also, I can't think of a good title for it... Verse 1: Don't let them tell you you are not allowed to live your life They push and pull you, telling you what's wrong and what is right You can't do this, you can't do that You are too thin, you are too fat Everyone is watching you, and we're just making sure everything's perfect But wait a minute Chorus: I wanna be the imperfect girl 'Cause it's too hard livin' in this crazy world Air-brushed bodies and egos, too There's too much pressure when everyone looks up to you Verse 2: I feel like listening to music, dancing like a fool But instead, I'm on TV and in the movies, acting like it's cool The good life gets boring too fast Too many lies and not enough facts Certain lines should not be crossed, but that's too late for the young, naive, and lost But that won't be me Chorus: I wanna be the imperfect girl 'Cause it's too hard livin' in this crazy world Air-brushed bodies and egos, too There's too much pressure Bridge: I wanna break away from it all Once you reach the top, you start to fall Why can't I just break away from this world? I'll live and learn from every mistake Isn't perfectness just being fake? I don't wanna be your perfect glamour girl Chorus: I wanna be the imperfect girl 'Cause it's too hard livin' in this crazy world Air-brushed bodies and egos, too There's too much pressure (too much pressure) I wanna be the imperfect girl 'Cause it's too hard livin' in this crazy world Air-brushed bodies and egos, too There's too much pressure when everyone looks up to you Bridge: I wanna break away from it all Once you reach the top, you start to fall Why can't I just break away from this world? I'll live and learn from every mistake Isn't perfectness just being fake? I don't wanna be your perfect glamour girl...
That was an amazing song, it flows perfectly, allowing you to imagine the song being sung in your head flawlessly. The story is quite interesting, and i can partially relate to it. Nice job, khhottie.
Great job. The rhymes fit well and don't seem forced. The whole song just flows really well, and the message is clear and inspiring. So good job (again!) =)
