Another Poem

Discussion in 'Archives' started by GenerationVIII, Jul 10, 2008.

  1. GenerationVIII Destiny Islands Resident

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    Sorrow
    This pain
    That we feel
    as our lives
    head downhill

    It makes us wonder
    About tomorrow
    About
    the sorrow

    No more are
    our lives in order
    and so we put this incident
    in our tradegy folder​
     
    GenerationVIII, Jul 10, 2008
    GenerationVIII, Jul 10, 2008
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  2. T3F Chaser

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    Nice Work! I love it!
     
    T3F, Jul 10, 2008
    T3F, Jul 10, 2008
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  3. tofuman Twilight Town Denizen

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    that was really good i love it
     
    tofuman, Jul 10, 2008
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  4. Sabby Sleepy Panda Assassin

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    Woah... that's really good. Really deep man.
     
    Sabby, Jul 10, 2008
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  5. GenerationVIII Destiny Islands Resident

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    But I'm a girl...

    And thank you all for your comments...
     
    GenerationVIII, Jul 10, 2008
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  6. Last of the Organization Twilight Town Denizen

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    Yes...trully a good poem...it hits home with me for sure....
     
    Last of the Organization, Jul 11, 2008
    Last of the Organization, Jul 11, 2008
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