Another KH Story

k.... EHEM why am I a complete jerk????? I did let u use my idea 4 ur story.... *snif* Im not that bad! And my names Kirsty not Kristy... *shrugs* I dont mind, Kristy is wot my friends at school call me n e way... but thats just cuz they're spanish and cant say Kirsty lol. *snif* sry I shouted, Sora! I rly didnt mean it!!!!!! Dis mean person made me shout... I was brainwashed!!!!

 

Sry SRY SRY SRY SRY!!!!!! OMIGOSH! SRY! I didn't know how to make you act, and since you haven't seen Sora in a year, and he left you in Twilight Town, I didn't think of anything, but you get nicer... PROMISE!! and the competion over Sora begins, MWHAHAHAHA!! ;)

Chapter 8~
"You know her?" I asked, looking shocked.
"Yeah, her name's-"
"Haruki." Kirsty finished. "She's a ghost that follows Sora. Poor Key-Boy." She imitated Sora's pose.
"Stop that." he said, commenting on the imitation. "Yeah, what Kirsty the imitator said, she's a ghost, that follows me."
"Why?"
"I look like-"
"Roxas."
"Stop finishing my-"
"Sentences." Kirsty giggled.
"Stop-"
"It!"
"ARG!" Sora hit his head on a pillow. I stared as Kirsty laughed and laughed. I giggled a little. Sora stopped and looked up at me, then glanced at Kirsty.
"LOOKED AT WHAT YOU HAVE-"
"Done." Sora growled, and I tapped him on the shoulder.
"What about this girl?" Sora nodded.
"The point is, we think she was a nobody that hung around-"
"Roxas" Kirsty said.
"And then Roxas dissapeared, leaving her alone, so she's following me around-"
"Thinking he's Roxas." Kirsty cut in.
"But she keeps saying 'Stay away from Sora.'" I said.
"She's following me, right now, but she just stays hidden. So she probally heard my name a couple of times." Sora said, rubbing the back of his head.
"I tired, I need to get back to bed." I said, rubbing my eyes. Kirsty sat on the floor.
"We're staying in here." she said.
"Yeah." Sora agreed, sitting in the chair. I nodded, closed my eyes, and fell asleep.
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Sry its so short! And, there, SoriKai, your character not as mean now!

 

It's time for some EXTREME things to happen, and secrets to be revialed. ^^
Chapter 9~
I slowly opened my eyes, adjusting to the bright sunlight that filled the room. I sat up and rubbed my eyes, looking around the room; Sora was still in his chair, with Kirsty sitting on the floor. I smiled at them. Are these really what friends are like? I thought.
*FLASH BACK!! ^^*
I ran down a large hill, unaware of my surroundings, my breathes uneven. I looked back at the burning village. No, not again. My eyes watered, as I ran along a pond. I slowed down, breathing evening up. A shadowy figure appeared behind me, and grabbed my mouth, picking me up.
"Ah, I found you."
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"NO!" I screamed, holding my head. Sora and Kirsty leaped up.
"She's back?" Sora and Kirsty asked, in unison. I breathed uneveningly, tears rolling down my face.
"Milo?" Sora asked, sitting next to me. "What's wrong?" I looked up.
"N-Nothing." I choked out, wiping away my tears.
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I struggled to get out of the figure's grip.
"So, I finally found the devil's spawn, Milo Prescot." I kicked his leg, but he didn't buge. "What's wrong, little devil? Are you homesick? You wanna go back to your village?" He jerk me to stare at the village. "Every where you go, disater and bad luck will follow." I pulled his hand off my mouth.
"MOMMY! DADDY!"
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I stared at my toast, unable to move.
"Milo?" Sora asked again. I raised my hand, which was shaking, to pick up my toast. "Every where you go, disater and bad luck will follow." Kirsty stared over at me, with her dark blue eyes.
"Bad Luck?" she asked. I jerked my head up at her.
"What?" I asked.
"Bad luck?"
"You can say that... I guess." I wasn't able to actually tell them.
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Arg, short, but VERY clue giving, huh?

 

whoa

Genius!pure genius!now me i want to add my character~~~~~hahahahahaa!more chapters srry im going berserk.k.calm down.

Name: Keath Kingten (boy)

Abilities:to control heartless and sand.

Good/bad:hes good, but quiet, and strong. but the travelers dont believe that hes good.

Anything else:crystal blue eyes, wears what sora wears with tattered yellow cape and the suit is:base colour:beige, with the rest is normal.spiky hair like cloud, and wears a black bandage over most of his face, leaving only one eye.He doesnt really care about what people say about him, and hes mostly quiet.age:14.wears a black necklace,mostly seen with a black teddy-bear heartless-(aww.cute.) and a fishing pole, tied to his back.

where you want to apear: defeating heartless in front of inn

base story:this guy was trained by yen sid, and guards places if paid.heartless are always attacking him, since he has the necklace of heartless....wow.his family was turned into heartless, and somehow he wasnt, since he found that necklace while he was fishing.

weapon:long thick sword (cloud type) with red outlining and golden handle, with a black bandage around it.(like clouds)

Extra character:Sometimes a heartless (think something up) out of 3 (his mother, father, or sister) will be on his shoulder.

now go go go!!!!!

 

Wow, very descriptive, most of the people that join, I have to ask most of the things you put in, but ok.
The inn, heartless, sword, hair, and all the other stuff is CHECK!! ^^

 

as you can see, i am very picky, and i apologize.id just like to add one change:
his hair is brown, and its a shag, and hes irish. goddarnit im so picky.srry!

 

It's no problem. Its easier, cause now I won't have to ask you all these things!! ^^ yah!!

 

glad to be of service.*bows*

 

Wow this is going really well.Ok add my character

Name:Kathy

Ablities:Guards a special necklace that her mother gave her.

Good/Bad:Good

Anything else:Same age as Sora.Very light blue eyes.Shoulder length hair.Her hair is brown and a bit straight,wavy and curly.Her outfit sortof looks like a ninja outfit but without the mask.Lives in a village and is the only extreme skilled fighter in her village.All the younger children look up to her.

Where you want to appear:In a her home village

Base Story:Her parents were killed during an invasion in her village.She is a princess but nobody in the village knows except her.

Weapon:A keyblade (The middle one)

Extra Character?:Seems to see Sora a bit familiar.Can be a bit secertive about her life.She knows the king(King Mickey)

Keep up the good work:)

 

ok, do you want a certain name for your home village? if not, I can make one up. Thanks again! ^^

 

Umm go head and make one up:)

 

Chapter 10~
I stared at Kirsty and Sora fought.
"YOU WERE THE ONE WHO TOLD ME TO FLUSH THE TOLIET!" Sora yelled.
"WELL I DIDN'T KNOW YOU CLOGGED IT UP WITH TOLIET PAPER!"
"SORRY!"
"OH MY GOSH! SHUT UP!" I yelled at the two of them.
"Milo?" Sora asked, a little scared.
"You two have been at it for over an hour now, and we need to get back to the inn!" I screeched at them. "Now, stop your stupid fighting, and lets get back to Alex and Tray!" Sora and Kirsty nodded in unison and followed me as we walked back to Port Royal's inn. I stopped suddenly as a boy fighting along side heartless attacked some Dusks. He turned and his crystal blue eye sparkled, as a black bandage covered the other one. A necklace dangled from his neck, baring the heartless logo, as the Dusks dissapeared. His spiky hair blew in the slight breeze.
"Milo, Sora, and Kirsty? Correct?" he asked us. We all nodded and noticed three heartless standing beside him. "No worries, these are my parents and my sister." The smallest jumped up and sat on his shoulder.
"Who are you?" Kirsty asked, a bit confused.
"Keath, Keath Kingten." he answered looking down at the two heartless. The smaller one swayed from side to side. Its pinkish eyes stared at Keath. Jack rushed out, Tray, Alex, Sarah, and Luna not far behind.
"Kirsty! Sora!" Jack yelled. "A young lass by the name of Kat- or something, just sent a letter. She needs you in Kanto, right now." Sora and Kirsty nodded, leaving me out a bit. Sora, I, Kirsty, Alex, Luna, and Sarah piled into the Gummi Ship, leaving Tray, Jack, and Keath behind. I stared down as Haruki stared up at me with saddened eyes, then dissapeared. Was that the last off the ghost? I asked myself.

EDIT: Arg! Its too short, cause I'm saving all the best for last! ^^