You would think I would learn That I would be able to see this coming once more, again and again, it's always the same path that leaves me sore. I think just maybe, just maybe this chance could work out, casting aside everything I have, perhaps there could be good in this day to be. I offer you my heart and mind in hand, hoping that this time that I am right, that giving them to you isn't a mistake, that I won't remember that time as a blight. But as I sit and think after it all, I can't help but feel like a fool, why did I jump in head first, why did I once again take a fall. Putting all my trust, giving all my feelings and will, sacrificing them for you, letting you of me take your fill. Hoping that I didn't give my heart to you in vain, trusting that you won't let me break, but what is the use, always in these situations I end up feeling pain. So I once again ask myself, why did I do it? what could have possibly made me change my mind, why did I go out on a limb thinking this one would fit. Well once again it turned out wrong, I'm sitting in emotion and suffering, once finding myself searching, for that one girl in whose heart I belong. -Once again I took a chance and risk in a relationship, unfornately by the mood of the poem it didn't turn out too well-
Wow... I can tell that you put alot of emotion into this poem... I can feel how sad you are... The strength of it is breathtaking... *hugs* I'm sorry that happened... But hey, when you fall down, you just have to find the strength to stand back up again... God will give you the strength, so just hang in there... You'll find who you're destined to be with. :)
I loved it. It reminds me of situations that I seem to find myself getting into with a person. It really touched me that way. And I really sort know what you are going through. I hate saying that, because I might not, but there was nothing else I could come up with. But anyways, totally awesome! Would you care if I put it on my site, if I gave you credit?
