Traditional Art Anna and Zeke

Its something I made for DestinyStar my EMO buddy ^^ She is the best!The picture is a little faded cuz the stupid scanner

http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc210/Japanime95/annaandzeke.jpg

 

it is kind faded

 

its nice =] The scanner does that too, BEFORE, now it just doens't work >.>

anyways, the person to the right's hair is covering her face, maybe putting it so you can see her eyes? The star earring is a bit too big.

But it looks good =]

 

yeah it is good

 

its a guy and the earring had to stand out.

 

yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

 

Eh,it ain't THAT bad I guess :l

Try to re-shade the drawing,it makes the character like it's fading away or something and the star earring seems a little bit flat,try to give it some shape.

As for the girl's hair,it's flowy and it looks nice but the guy's hair seems abit fake,try it to give it some flow and let's not cover his eyes next tiem shall we?

It's a good drawing though,keep practicing~
C:

 

Thnks and yea he was hard because I didn't get a great picture of him,but I have better pictures then this.Its all faded becuz my scanner does that.It would look better colored.

 

blame it all on your scanner

 

cool picture. it IS a little faded though...

 

Yea I do it messed up my other ones to.Like this one of sora
http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc210/Japanime95/lovelysora.jpg

 

its nice - im sure DS will love it

 

Thnks ^^ I showed it to her and she liked it

 

yeah destinystar will like it

 

Yup she does like it she was the first person to see.

 

oh okay stupid scanner

 

cloud's buddy, quit spamming the thread - if you're gonna say something then say something useful. :<

K, back to the art:

When you know that your scanner will blur your drawing, then that is the sign to sharpen it up before you scan it. All scanners will mess up in one way or another, but it can be easily avoided if you draw harder lines next time.

Tootsie pretty much said the main things I'd bring up - the drawing would look very lovely with some shade. I really like the portrait poses going on. :3 The hands look very good! I'd pay extra attention to the eyes tho, it's like an unwritten rule that the upper eyelashes will have a harder dark line than the lower eyelids. (unless you're L from Death Note)

( your version of that Sora picture is funneh! Fish in mouth is a nice twist.. :> ) The KH picture is a good example of how hard you should shade your lineart, try to do that with the first picture so that we can enjoy the details much more. Cause I feel like I'm missing out on so much.

 

Thnks for the advice well i had no time to shgade cuz i was on the computer and drawing at the same time.But I gave DS the pic already at school and she loved it ^^