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  1. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    Tamara is painting in art class.

    Ino started walking back towards the school.
     
  2. ericy11 Moogle Assistant

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    i knew that itachi was mindless

    lucario wanders with his eyes closed untill he bumps into someone
     
  3. leon47 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Vegeta was still reading
     
  4. sora117 Moogle Assistant

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    *Name:John (A.K.A spartan 117)
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    *ApperanceUsally wears a army green suit.
    *Clothes:white shrt,jeans, and when out side a hat
    *Show/Manga/etc.:Dalo1,2,3
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    *Elective Drama
     
  5. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    OOC- Finally! a new person! XD XD lol jk jk

    ur in ^^

    Tamara finished her painting and gazed at it, looking for any mistakes. It was a beautiful picture of a sunset over a deep, blue ocean.
     
  6. ericy11 Moogle Assistant

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    welcome

    lucario sneaks in a construction crew into the library and forces the librarian to close the library"
     
  7. leon47 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Vegeta was very Angery

    So he turned Super sayain
     
  8. sora117 Moogle Assistant

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    Um hello and what period or what ever is it?

    CAuse i dont know were to go =(
     
  9. Near-to-Tears Hollow Bastion Committee

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    OOC- You just have to walk through the gates. Don't worry to much about the lessons just yet, I still don't know what lesson it is for Rikku and I've been back here three weeks! XD
     
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    O.K. *walks through gates and goes to dorm to put things away*

    *after puts things away lays on bed and takes a nap*
     
  11. Near-to-Tears Hollow Bastion Committee

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    OOC- Just to point out you need to write more than that. And waitr for someone else to post before you do again lol. I didn't even get the chance to send Rikku out to say hi. You need to write it more like a book or a story.

    Rikku was lying down under a tree outside peacefully watching the clouds float past hundreds of feet above her.
     
  12. sora117 Moogle Assistant

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    OCC oh heheh sorry i have never done this before
     
  13. leon47 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Vegeta clamed Down and went do his Next class

    Vegata:I am boared
     
  14. Near-to-Tears Hollow Bastion Committee

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    OOC- Don't worry about it. ^^ Just try and string a sentence together to start with then start trying to make them longer as you go. The try two and then a paragraph. Sometimes it's easier then others but you should be able to pick it up easily.
     
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    John woke up from his lil nap and got on his hat and took a walk around the school cause he was bored and desided to climb a try and sleep there.





    OOC- is that better
     
  16. leon47 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Vegeta sat down on chair and Hummed to himself

    Vegeta:What to do what to do
     
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    OOC- Yeah much better and it's a great start. ^^ But you still need to slow down a little, so instead of writing all that in one sentence you could of strung it out a little more. And maybe be a little clearer about where they are, like how they got there. But if you RP enough you should get the hang of it easily. Just like everything else it's practice.

    "Hey." Rikku said looking up into the tree "When did you get up there?" She asked John with surprised expression rest on her face.
     
  18. leon47 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Vegeta seen Rikku

    Vegeta:Whats going on Rikku
     
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    "Huh? So you're talking to me know then?" She replied snappily before pointing up into the tree "Someone's up in the tree, anyone you know?"
     
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    Vegeta:No Idea who that is Never met him Before Wonder who he is
     
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