Angels Don't Like Heroes

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  1. Luna Lovegood nani panda-kun

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    Dude, for serious, where can I get dust like that? 8D
    Write more. ;_;
     
    Luna Lovegood, Feb 25, 2009
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  2. Nova We left a scar size extra-large.

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    What was that dust?
    Keep up the good work, can't wait for moar >:D
     
    Nova, Feb 27, 2009
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  3. TacoGrenade King's Apprentice

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    Nicely done. Everything was written in a good amount of detail and the story is very compelling. The fights have been really well done so far too.
     
    TacoGrenade, Feb 28, 2009
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  4. Arch Mana Knight

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    There. Happy? I did bad on this...it's mostly just...dialoge.

    Poor Grey? XD

    In the Prince of Persia Sands of Time trilogy. xD Lol. But this is different. B|

    It's important to Grey's power! 8D

    Thank you. I thought I did bad with the fight. >> <<

    UPDATED FINALLY!!!
     
    Arch, Mar 8, 2009
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  5. Aura Goddess

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    OMG. XD

    I don't know why but, I find this chapter cute. XD

    I want to know how this date is going to go. XDD    ​
     
    Aura, Mar 8, 2009
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  6. Nova We left a scar size extra-large.

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    Lulz 8D
    I wanna see whut happens between Grey and Krystal 8D
     
    Nova, Mar 14, 2009
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  7. Arch Mana Knight

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    I don't feel so good...><

    Blah...

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    Arch, Mar 17, 2009
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  8. Aura Goddess

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    Aw. That was adorable. XDD

    I liked it. Can't wait for the next chapter. 8DD    ​
     
    Aura, Mar 17, 2009
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  9. Arch Mana Knight

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    Next chappy ish here. Adorable or not? XD

    NOT CUTE! D8< Oh God...this is feeling like Twilight to me. >< *Will fix that*

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    Arch, Apr 12, 2009
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  10. Aura Goddess

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    I liked it. Very cute. XD

    And you're kind of right. It sounds a little like Twilight. O.o

    But hopefully all this action you'll be bringing will change that. XD    ​
     
    Aura, Apr 12, 2009
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  11. Boy Wonder Dark Phoenix in Training

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    I could actually see this becoming a real series, the concept is pretty good.

    A little criticism, though?
    You should put a little more background to Grey, like how someone with no past was able to get an apartment and make a living (although it can't be that hard to "get" money when people can't follow yr movements)
    And I kind of see Michael being a bad guy and convincing Grey to kill Nex who is really a good guy, just...rough around the edges. If Nex really is bad, then his "badness" was shown too early.

    But still, can't wait for the next chapter!
    Hurry up and end the suspense!
     
    Boy Wonder, Apr 13, 2009
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  12. Arch Mana Knight

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    Sorry for the f*cking long delay. School+Vacation time=Not much writing. XDX

    Bad Twilight. Bad. Dx

    Cuteness? Uh...I dunno if my next chapter is cute.

    Yeah. I'm gonna add that background soon enough. @-@
    And...I'm gonna hold back on who's the bad guy. XD Until I want to reveal who it is. >8D
     
    Arch, Jun 4, 2009
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  13. Aura Goddess

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    Michelle cracked me up in the last part. XD

    Short but sweet. Hurry up with the updates. B|    ​
     
    Aura, Jun 4, 2009
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  14. Arch Mana Knight

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    Slow update is slow. B|

    Eh. I had to do this one fast because time is running short. >> It's Sunday. School keeps me busy.

    UPDATED
     
    Arch, Sep 27, 2009
    Arch, Sep 27, 2009
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  15. Aura Goddess

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    Again, here I'm liking the way you kept a nice pace with the fighting part. :3
    Good. Took you a while and it was a bit short but good. I feel sorry for Grey though. D:

    I hope the next update is soon. ^^    ​
     
    Aura, Sep 28, 2009
    Aura, Sep 28, 2009
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  16. Arch Mana Knight

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    Grey's been going through lots of changes. 8D8

    Took me forever and it's been awhile since I've looked at my story here but...

    UPDATED!
     
    Arch, Dec 23, 2009
    Arch, Dec 23, 2009
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  17. Aura Goddess

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    Grey better not die. ; ; And Nex's appearance creeped me out since I pictured it in my head. D:
    I kind of pictured Nex more of a bad angel seeing as how his appearance is...creepy. @-@
    Good chapter though. Hopefully the next chapter is soon.    ​
     
    Aura, Dec 23, 2009
    Aura, Dec 23, 2009
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  18. Luna Lovegood nani panda-kun

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    Did I see some poetry going on thar? : D
    I really liked that half-poetry-half-narrative thing. AND GODDAMN WHEN YOU MAKE A CLIFF HANGER LIKE THAT, DON'T LEAVE IT SO LONG! 8D8
     
    Luna Lovegood, Dec 23, 2009
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  19. Nova We left a scar size extra-large.

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    Liked this most recent chapter. It was one of my favorites. Stop it with the cliffhangers! ; ; I must know what happens.
     
    Nova, Dec 30, 2009
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  20. Arch Mana Knight

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    Nex is creepy. He has his reasons for being what he is though. ^^

    Really? 8DDDD ...This chapter won't disappoint. It was nine pages long when I checked it. It's practically a way to show that I'm not afraid to kill off someone. B| Lots of new characters(well not yet XD) and one returning one(you'll see in this chapter).

    There we go. Done. I loved this chapter. You get to see Grey's badass side now.

    UPDATED!
     
    Arch, Dec 30, 2009
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