Am I Invisible to You?

I'm standing right in front of you
but you don't even talk to me
can't you see me?
can't you hear me?
I feel as if I'm invisible to you

Every day I pass right by you
but you never even notice
I'll be standing right next to you
as you talk to your friends
but you won't even know I'm there

I don't know why you never notice me
but it makes me feel empty inside
like nobody cares
and I'm all alone in this world
but maybe all of that is true

I wish that just one day
you would actually notice me
and come up to say hello
and then maybe we could be friends
but I know that day will never come
because I am invisible to you
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uhh... just wrote it for fun! ^^​

 

Ohhh...nice poem! And it's alright, I write sad poems myself all the time, even when I'm happy. XD Anyway, great job, honey! :glomp:

 

You ripped the theme from me again... XD, anyways I like it ^^.

 

... I did? >.< sorry... lol... *huggles*

 

Is okay XD.

 

I like this poem, good job, only thought is punctuation? I know some poems do better without any at all, but just a suggestion. I can really relate to this poem because it reminds me of high school.

 

Great job.

Yeah, the theme is similar to one of Chaser007's themes, but you still did good with it.

Like Destined said, watch your grammar. But you still did great.
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Hmmmm....good length.....good free verse.....atmosphere is a little iffy......:P.....overall good poem....oh and one more thing.....your never alone....

 

Sorry. ^ Grammar mistakes bother me.

But I do agree with what he said in you're never alone.

Great job again, I like the second verse the best.
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great jobbbbbbbbbbbb

 

I remember what it was like to feel invisible..... >.<

 

U really emphasize on how it feels like, great job in showing emotion.