Although I promised

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  1. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Although I promised not to cry
    I can not help but let the tears flow
    This pain of losing you is just too much
    It is too real for me to fight
    I am so sorry that I had to cry
    But losing you was too much to bear

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    I just got back from seeing a play at college, and there was this one part that was so sad, it was about a lady who had lost her love, and most people there started crying, even me...So this is what the poem is about
     
  2. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    That made me cry as well. It brought back memories of my mum. That's a lovely poem sis.
     
  3. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Thanks sis, glad you like it as always
     
  4. Nanaki Broken in six places

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    I like it. I can relate my life to it,really... You did a good job!
     
  5. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Everyone who has lost a loved one can
     
  6. Mr. Van Whippy ♥ Biscuits and cookies

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    That's a promise a took a year ago after several things that happened in my life. Nothing related to death though. A really nice poem.
     
  7. Nexit@h XIV King's Apprentice

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    T...That's beautifull...really beautifull Anniexo...*cries*
    I...I loved it! I nearly cried when I read this :)
     
  8. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Aww bless yea (three more words)
     
  9. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Beautiful...
    very touching indeed.
     
  10. zerogit Destiny Islands Resident

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    Yes, very poetic, after losing friends, houses, and family I can really relate.