alone

Thanks ^^ and lol yeah the system hates me.​

 

:sweatdrop: I can't write happy poems, IMO they always come out feeling fake when I write them (except for the rare occasion xD).

To me, sadness and anger are deeper emotions and so have more of an impact ^^

Thanks :)​

 

I can't tell you how much this relates to me and explains what I'm going through.
GOOD LORD... its explaining just the way I am feeling at this exact moment.
Good job.

 

I am sorry to hear that you are feeling like this *hugs* it is a horrible feeling I know. I am very glad though that you can relate to my work.

I hope you feel better :)​

 

Aww. Thank you!

*hugglez*

I hope you feel better too. It's a terrible feeling and its just... I dont know...

We need to stick together.. =]

 

>_>;

Ask me no questions and I will tell you no lies xD


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I never thought it would be this hard
to say goodbye to you
I keep thinking of all the memories
All that we've been through

So I am taking this time to tell you
How much you mean to me
And to say thank you for everything
For helping me to see
That I could be much more
That what they try to dictate
That I could live my own life
And not just leave it upto fate

I haven't had the easiest past
I have seen so much go wrong
But you have been there for me
You have helped me to be strong

So live life and be happy
Be all that you can be
And know that you will always be much more
Than just a fading memory

I will miss you

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^^ this is actually written with a positive attitude for once xD one that wishes good luck to everyone for all they do :)​

 

*clap clap clap* u never fail to amaze me fabulous poem CtR =D

 

awesome poem and who knew that it would be positive jk. Great job

 

Great job - I can't even find one mispelled word this time. XD
Although in here:

I never thought it would be this hard
to say goodbye to you
I keep thinking of all the memories
All that we've been through

I think the 'to' should be capitalized to balance it out. Otherwise great job - I can tell you're a great poet. :)

 

that was really good *gives cookie*

 

xD thanks VB <3

:P I know what you mean xDDD and thanks ^^

Hmmm I have to disagree, if I were to capitalise the 't' in 'to' it would put the emphasis on 'to' and not 'you'

thanks for the compliment 8D

xD thanks *shares cookie*​

 

\_Oo_/

It's been a while. Hmm. Well here you go then. It's a freeflow, I would appreciate your thoughts.

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I feel Like I'm frozen
Like everything is falling
And all I can do is stand and watch

Lost since you left me
Lost since that last time
Lost in the memory of you

Everything crashes
It all falls apart
And I realise that its all because of me

I was never there for you
I was always trying to be everywhere else
I let you down
Now youre no longer around
And I wish I had just told you

I wish I had told you
How much you meant to me
That you were all I wanted
That you were all I would see

And now I am left
Trapped behind
Lost in this darkness
A darkness filled with empty faces
Whos harsh words cut like glass
I cant break free
Youre not there for me
Like I wasnt there for you

I wrap my arms around myself
To hide from the wind and the rain
Im tired of fighting now
Im tired of being trapped by this image
Trapped behind a mask of smiles
When inside my heart is breaking

I'm so tired
And I'm so sorry I let you down
I was always too scared to tell you the truth
I wanted you to be proud of me
So I hid my tears and forced a smile
I fought myself to be who you wanted
But it wasnt enough
It never is

I wasn't good enough then
I'm not good enough now
I never will be
I can only be me
I'm sorry.​

 

Wow CTR, I didn't know you wrote poetry. Excellent work. ;3

 

its beautiful!

Even though its not rhyming, I felt a rhythm. It was lovely.

It was really good. =]

 

*claps* woohoo awesome 10 stars out of 5

 

I love it, but again, it looks something I wrote when I was depressed, is everybody ripping me XD.

 

I write a lot x_x I have a lot in the creativity corner. Thank you.

Thank you ^^ and I didn't want it to rhyme XD I am glad you liked it

<3 thank you lots

I was writing this sort of style long before you became depressed Chaser xD

Go look at my older threads in creativity xD

Thanks for liking.​

 

CtR!

Another Poem!

I love how your poems never have titles, just amazing little symbols and stuff.

Another great one, but it's kind of destined to be becuase it came from you. Great job.
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Thank you :glomp:

xD it has been a while it seems since I wrote one :P

<< I can never think of titles :P that's why ^^

Thank you very much *hugs*​

 

awesome ... as always xD