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ur writing is just idk how to explain so full of meaning and feeling its hard not to love it and some of ur poems may be sad but being sad is part of life so i find ur writing to be intriguing

 

sry if i keep complimenting so much but once i saw the first one i loved and i knew u had more so i kept looking and once i love one i can't stop and end up loving all the rest cuz writing is the most amzing thing ever and i believe u have an amazing talent

 

Yeah he hurt me pretty bad ._. lol it is ironic, but when I am sad and down that is where I get my best inspiration from, maybe I should thank them for being idiotic xD

Thank you again :)​

 

The sky grew darker
Grey clouds overhead
The rain fell down around me
Whispering every word you have ever said

^That was my favorite stanza. It really emphasizes the sadness expressed through the whole poem with great impact as well as some nice metaphors.

The whole poem is well thought out. The emotions can really be taken in if you get in the mood.

 

Thank you very much, it really does mean a lot to me that someone likes them so much ^^ I agree that writing is an amazing thing and it makes me so happy that you think of mine so highly :)​

 

yup totally understand geesh i'm in luv wit ur writing cuz it so phenomenal and i can relate to some ro at least understand the feeling

 

well i luv writing and i look up to people who are fascinating writers like u but i'd have 2 say ur the first who has really got my attention cuz ur masterpieces are beautiful so i look up 2 u and sry but i've officially made u my older sis and role model cuz ur an amazing person well i'm not sure well i'm sure u are an awesome person but i hardly know u yet ur writng is incredible

 

When I write them, I write them straight from how I feel, you are right, being sad is part of life, and it is a part that gives me the best inspiration. ^^

o: thank you :) I am glad that you think so because that was what I hoped for it ^^ thank you for the compliment 8D​

 

yeah when i'm the saddest all these amazing words come to mind and form something beautiful and when i'm happy i don't know but its like i don't seem to care as long as i'm happy is all that matters so not mnay things will come to mind only sometimes

 

I really have nothing to say to that, I have just be complimented into oblivion 0_0 all I can say is thank you so many many times, and I have no objection to being your older sister xD

Seriously thank you for saying that.​

 

no prob people like you should be recognized cuz ur writing has me crazy its something real amazing please keep writing cuz its awesome and i hope we can become best buddies :D

 

There is Nothing

New one. That's it.


*******

Messed up again
And theres only mself to blame
It happens this way, every time
It always ends the same

I feel like I am falling
Fading away
I just wish that for once
It went a happier way

You say that everything is ok
And tell me everything is fine
But I can see it in your eyes
I thought you could be everything
But you were never mine

Again Im left feeling hollow
Feeling lost in self-hate
Maybe some are meant to be alone?
Maybe it is my fate

I guess I will never find "the one"
I guess it isnt meant to be
It's better I realise that now right?
I can survive right? just being me

I guess I have no choice
And I cant find my voice
Though at least I finally see
There is no soulmate for me

There is Nothing.​

 

awesome

Everyone of your poems has such a deep emotional connection. You've got a great sense of wording and are a great poet!!

 

Thank you very much :) my emotions are what influences me the most in my writing, I am glad that they are portrayed so well then :)

Thank you ^^​

 

yay another poem luvs ya its beutifully written *gives Ctr a big hug and best poet award* =D

 

wowzers awesome reminds me of isabella and edward in new moon btw i cried in the part where he left her i was like a wet mess :((

 

o: thanks ^^ *hugs back*

But there are other members who I think write better than me xD

:)​

 

Those books are fantastic, thank you for such a big compliment :) ​

 

Wow that was really cool...once again wish I could rep you but...oh well...

 

Wow these are really good, as I've said before. I actually like sad poems more, they actually make me sit and think more, whereas I just quickly read through most happy poems.