Alone I want to be alone.... Where no one can hurt me... No crying no heart aces... No feelings no lies... People feel sorry for me... Saying she’ll never make it... I’ll show them you don’t have to be with someone... To make it through life... I can get a job and cook for myself... I don’t need anyone... They’ll throw me pitty... Giving me money... But I’ll just give it away... I don’t need any pitty... Life maybe hard... But love is one reason... More wars are made... Then peace treaties... No one can find hope... They cant even find faith.. So how are they finding... Faith in each other... Being alone is better... Your choices... Your money... I’d rather die alone... Then die with one crying... And make every one happy.. That thy ugly beast... Is no more...
Wow it's so..sad. And I can kind of relate. It kinda seem like a note or something. <p.s do you mean "aches"?>
First I'd like to say I really appreciate your poem...right now sad poems are the only thing I am in the mood to hear....secondly it is a wonderful poem of expression...excellent job Dark Shadow....
Lovely poem.I really like it.You showed emotion and I can see you put deep thought into it.Nicely done.
