Alice In Murderland

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  1. Shuhbooty moon child

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    I'm locked in a broom closet.
    That's funny. xDD
    AND E IS SUCKA SICK PIGGY!
    xDDD

    Wow Meme, you've improved much, I can see it. You went into more detail, and you make me laugh, you're getting much better, awesome job!
    <33333
     
  2. Rayku Kingdom Keeper

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    Thank you so much, I left it as a cliffhanger so I can get more Ideas...
     
  3. Shuhbooty moon child

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    But, I was really creepy that I was blindfolded ina basement, shivering to death.
    xDD

    Ohh lets talk ideas then.
    xD
     
  4. Mielé Banned

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    Omg, I love it <333

    You've improved on writing too :'D

    Can't wait for next chapter 8D
     
  5. Dinny I am Anime ( ⚈้̤͡ ◡ ⚈้̤͡ )

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    Wow... the story really is going well :]
    Love it, keep up the good work Memento Mori~
    Don't stop writing! >D
     
  6. Ultimecia sorceress

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    A big role huh, I like. Also liking how E took a beating form Miele xD. More detail is coming in making this way better. Can't wait for next chapter.
     
  7. Shuhbooty moon child

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    Okay, what did you have in mind?

    When you were thinking about the Cliffhanger?
    D:
    Any?
     
  8. Doukuro Chaser

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    Evil E <_<

    You've gotten better, nice work~

    So me comes in soon, right? *Impaintent* xD Tis okay, I can wait.
     
  9. Sumi suicidé

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    Very Nice Mementi-san! You're a really good writer, and show your understanding of the element of fear while throwing in humor f0r a perfect mix!​
     
  10. Rayku Kingdom Keeper

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    I do have a reason though...it's hard for me to write anymore on this story...And I know you guys love this story, So instead of this friday..I shall post this preview...and you can geuss what happens


    Alice ventured towards the outside of the school and looked around.

    “Skittles! Are you there?” Alice yelled into the twilight shadows surrounding her and Miele. Miele walked towards an old shack nearby the football fields and tried to opened the door. It was locked shut, but Miele kicked at it for awhile and it was forced open. Alice walked inside the dusty room and saw a trapdoor.

    “Hey…Look at that, why would they have that there?” Alice bent down towards it and tried to open it. Nearby Miele picked up a board of wood and stood behind Alice and slammed the wood on the back of her head.

    “You are about to find out, little Alice…” Blood snaked its way out of the gash in her head and her eyes closed slowly as Miele began to drag her.