Traditional Art AHH! Trapped in a snowglobe

I did this for two reasons.

1. I'm going to start my own manga, and i need some practice in making it.
2. It's almost christmas time and i had to do something.



c'nc please.

 

Well it looks very flat. The hands shouldn't be paper thin against their shoulders. The necks also seem a little too long, witch makes the hair look shorter or longer than it should. Try some reference pix will help a lot.

I would say to practice on the anatomy more before you start your manga thing. I tried that once, didn't work well XD

It's a cute idea though^^

 

Yeah, i noticed that too. It does seem a little flat, but i'm thinking of editing it a little on my computer.

I'm actually taking that class next year, but thanks for the ida.

 

What demonic chick said~ :]

But still, I love the idea of them being in a snow globe. Cute :3

Good luck in making your manga~!! =D

 

Try to use more proportions :]

The hand shouldn't be so thin... and one side of the girl's chest is bigger than the other.

 

The circle is WAY out of proportion and Riku is too small. Kairi's eyes need to open, but Sora's looking great. Fix it, color it, and post it.

 

Awww, it's adorable!
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But first, the snowglabe is off, more circleish please. I like how you fit all three of them in there like that. xD
But you should make there cloths realistic, and Kairi's eyes look.. weird.
Sora should have more hair and Riku looks small... xDD