Agony...

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  1. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    Sitting here,
    Staring across the dance floor,
    Wondering where my dreams have gone,
    Where's my spirit?

    The night flies by,
    Feeling fine at first,
    But then I spot him,
    Hardly 5 feet away.

    My body feels limp,
    A crack forms in my heart,
    The tears in my eyes give way,
    As I see the one who was once mine.

    My friends are dancing,
    Holding their loved ones close,
    Another crack,
    My hearts falls to pieces.

    As the slow songs continue,
    The pain in my chest grows stronger,
    With each passing second,
    When will this end?

    Running away,
    Don't want to upset my friends,
    The tears fall down my cheeks,
    I hide in a bathroom stall.

    Breaking down,
    I start to cry harder,
    Feeling so lost,
    So broken.

    Quickly wipe them away,
    I try to look happy,
    Letting the red disappear from my cheeks,
    I head back to my friends.

    Seeing him again,
    I feel the urge,
    I want to dance,
    Should I ask?

    Pressured by friends,
    I let them ask for me,
    But when he refuses,
    My heart grinds to dust.

    The night goes on,
    Tick tock, tick tock,
    Too slow,
    When will this agony end?

    Sitting here alone,
    Near the rushing dance floor,
    The dust of my heart,
    Gone with the wind.


    That was longer than I intended it to be, but I needed to let a few feelings out... Anywho, CnC please?
     
  2. Princess_of_hearts Destiny Islands Resident

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    that was a really great poem. u can really feel everything your talking about... it was really powerful. good job on the whole thing... and i hope u feel better
     
  3. Shuhbooty moon child

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    Aw, honey, love.

    It's okay, don't get down because of... that. I'm here, along with all your other bestest friends. We love you, and if he can't see that then.. psh! <33333

    It was a touching poem... really touching. <:3
     
  4. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    Thanks, Princess... *hugs* <=)

    RS, I've tried telling myself that a million times, and it just doesn't work... I know I shouldn't be upset over this, but it's hard when he hangs around my friends and I can't even look at him without feeling like my heart got ripped out... *sighs*

    *huggles RS* Thankies... I'm glad u guys liked the poem. ^^
     
  5. Shuhbooty moon child

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    ..............

    Well, I'm always here for you. He's got a problem... is all...

    It was really touch again awesome poem. <:3
     
  6. Last of the Organization Twilight Town Denizen

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    Sigh...just like you told me once....I hate seeing you this way Destiny...I promise you...I promise you...there are far better guys...wait and see....near the end of highschool...college....you will lose most of these losers....yes...he is a loser....it may take some time...trust me I know....however God has that special guy waiting for you Destiny...he may not be anytime soon and you may have to wait...however he is out there...
     
  7. TheLightIsGone123 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    im here to help i guess destiny, even though you dont really want it, im here...