A Very Zelda Christmas

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  1. Hiro ✩ Guardian

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    'Twas the night before Christmas and everyone was cheery
    All except the Red Link, who found it quite dreary
    "I hate Christmas!" he told Blue who advised him to think his words through
    It's the same thing every year, thought Green, who knew Red preferred Halloween
    "What's so great about giving?" proclaimed Red, "I just wanna go to bed."
    "I feel so sorry for him..." said Green, "He's been this way since Zelda forgot 'im."
    "He likes presents, so we should give it a try," Blue said
    "Before he makes the girls cry." added Purple

    Desperate for help, they went to see Malon, who was busy hanging her lucky Christmas talon
    "Bake him some cookies on a pan of tin," she advised, "It'll surely make him grin."
    There was no flaw in the plan agreed the Links, it was as simple as a tin can.
    Suddenly, from inside came a crash!
    Everyone ran in with a dash
    Who had caused the mess? Why, none other than Red, whom everyone now liked considerably less
    It seemed that in a fit of rage, he had knocked over the tree
    They wanted to toss him into the sea

    Outside, Red sighed. "I've ruined Christmas," he said.
    He wanted to shout, but he just let himself out
    He felt really bad, and that was enough to make him sad
    Instead of going out and joining the festivities, he just wandered about
    He was innocent
    Now Red didn't want his present
    "I was a fool," he thought, "now no one thinks I'm cool.
    "All I ever cared about was receiving, and now all my friends are grieving."
    He stood up in determination, "I have to make this right."

    BAck at the house, Red worked all night.
    Then came morning with the golden winter sun
    and Red had to admit that Christmas decorating was fun.
    Down the stairs came MAlon, Blue, Purple and Green.
    When they say the living room, the all agreed
    It was the most beautiful thing they had ever seen
    Red came out and said "Merry Christmas!"
    "Red?" they all said
    "Did you fall on you head?"
    "No," said Red "I just wanted to be the one that said:
    "Sorry for all I've done"

    From then on, they had a good time.
    Once in a while, they even threw in a rhyme!
    Thus ends our Christmas story
    We have something else to say, so open your ears


    Merry Christmas, and Happy New Year!
     
  2. Hiro ✩ Guardian

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    I kinda thought it was too rhymie
     
  3. Rhiscx Banned

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    Actually I assumed it would rhyme at the end of each line. But what you did was fine.
     
  4. Loxare Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Very nice. Minimal spelling errors. But why did Zelda never show up? She was mentioned but...
     
  5. Hiro ✩ Guardian

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    She never showed up because I couldn't see a good way to fit her in.