Ok, so I was doing my English homework on analysis on a specific word/phase. I found this word to be a significant figure in the story so a thought came across my head. And this is the result… Dreams Dreams: a hidden realm A far, unpredictable dimension, Unlocked through the human mind. Revealing a land… Where the impossible resides. Where imagination roams free. Where time has no meaning. Where fantasy clash with reality. Where no man has conquered. Where fate leads a heavenly sonnet, Or a hellish extinction. But what is it? A society…of the unknown. An untouchable kingdom that can be seen. A kingdom of great mysteries. Dreams: a hidden realm I’m sorry if it really sux. I haven’t written poetry for almost 2 years. I wasn’t a very good poet from the start. Anyways, plz leave some comments cuz I always get mixed opinions in any poem I write so I’m really confused on how I should take poetry…(if u get wat I mean)
Hey ^^ you shouldn't be so negative about your work! :) I liked this a lot, it has a great feel to it, and has a thoughtful overtone that makes the reader question too, or at least it made me question the nature of dreams. I liked the repetition that you used (I use repetition in a lot of my own poems xD) I also liked how the last line and first line are the same, it creates a circle and adds closure. The only slight flaws I did see were so insignificant they aren't really worth mentioning :)
I thought it was really well written. Great job! I like the idea that you had about "Dreams". Really cool.
This work makes the reader realize and question what "Dreams" can really be and it is a great piece. Nice work with wording it.
Wow, I never thought schoolwork could b such an inspiration... Now all I have 2 do is wait for a grade from the assignment that gave me that idea. (lol, I got a B on my last essay although I usually get A's and stuff. And that one was only supposed to be a paragraph long...)
