A Poem, The Crappeist Thing

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Is This good?

Poll closed Dec 13, 2007.
  1. This is HORRIBLE

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  2. Needs Work

    2 vote(s)
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  3. Awesome

    7 vote(s)
    46.7%
  4. HOLY CRAP THIS IS AWESOME!

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    40.0%
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  1. reptar REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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    Denial
    The Initial Stage: You cry,"This cannot be happening" as you put your head upon your hands, you feel limp, the world will stop, time has frozen, you freeze.


    Anger
    You Scream, You Cry "WHY ME WHY ME THIS IS NOT HAPPENING" as you cry aloud, your heart is on fire, your soul is raging inside of you.


    Bargaining,
    You will not let this anger get in the way, you pray to the lord you bargain "Let me at least see my children graduate or even let me see the birth of my grandchild if you are kind enough"


    Depression
    "Why Bother....., it is over for me, there is no hope... it's the end for me..." you sob again putting your head in hands again.



    Acceptance
    "It's OK... it going to be OK.....relax" As you calm down, you put yourself back to your feet knowing your death will come soon
     
  2. Nailpolish <3 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    love it =]

    yes. 5 steps for grief aswell?

    its very nicely written.

    just some spelling and grammer mistakes, but thats it =]
     
  3. reptar REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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    Accualy(sp?) It is the Stages of Death
     
  4. Nailpolish <3 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    oh nvm. I thought it meant grief.

    but I still think its good. =]
     
  5. reptar REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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    Thanks :D

    /FILLERZ/
     
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