A poem of Feeling: Anger

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  1. RRMS Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Anger is the colour of Fire,
    A burning fire in your eye's...
    A scorching flame inside you..
    Anger can take over you,
    If your not careful...


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    Its only short, But the other day at school, I was writing this instead of doing my math. So I got told off and didnt get to finish it...But to tell you the truth, I dont really know what else to write so I left it at this...
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    But I still kinda like this poem...
     
  2. Valium Hollow Bastion Committee

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    *claps* i like it regardless of how long it is
     
  3. Enigmatic Boy Twilight Town Denizen

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    Thats a cool poem! I think it describes anger well!
     
  4. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    Is something making you angry? XD

    Great job though, it describes anger well.

    I'm a bit afraid to go near you when you're angry now though..

     
  5. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Short, but NICE.
     
  6. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    That multicolored nice was incredibly needed...XD
    And great poem anyway.

    I just want to say that in the two minutes since I last posted I happened to get very angry at something and it reminded me of this. Good job. You should try to expand to th rest of the emotions.
     
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