A poem I wrote

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  1. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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    This is a poem I wote I hope you all will like it
    Dream Chaser

    Eyes full of wonder
    Heart of desire
    Passion to live

    Passion to learn
    Eyes so innocent
    Exploring the world

    All it hes to give
    All it has to take
    Follow your heart

    Chase down your dreams
    Hold them tight
    Keep them safe inside

    Follow your heart
    Listen to your gut
    For they will lead you

    To where you need to be.​


    Hope you like it^^
     
  2. keybladeofdarkness4 Twilight Town Denizen

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    that was beatifull... *cries*
     
  3. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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    thank you very much.*starts to cry*
     
  4. tenshigrl Merlin's Housekeeper

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    thats good
     
  5. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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    I'll try to make more
     
  6. heartsof13 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    that was THE best one i've ever read
     
  7. cloud's buddy Traverse Town Homebody

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    that was really good
     
  8. cloud's buddy Traverse Town Homebody

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    make more please
     
  9. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Ok i this one i didn't write.

    The Edge of the World
    By Shel Silverstein

    Colubus said that the world is round
    Don't belive a word of that
    For I've been down to the edge of the world
    Sat on the edge where the blue smoke curls
    And I can tell you boys and girls
    The world is FLAT!

    Do you like this one?
     
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