A poem i wrote a while ago.......

This is a poem i wrote awhile ago when my friend went out with a boy that was using her for his advantage and i felt like i was losing her to him (in the end she figured out wat was going on and broke up with him. Now we're BFF again :) )

New winds are blowing,

Hopes are growing,

Friendships fall apart,

An Unknown Secret art,

I’m lost,

I’m losing friends at an unbearable cost

I’m losing them to boys,

She’s just another collectable toy,

We were excited for a while,

Then it’s the denial,

I’m all alone,

I feel like I’ve been shown,

What it’s like to die,

It’s just all these stupid guys,

I might be a little sly,

But I’m about to cry,

I can’t take much more,

I want my friends to come back to shore,

Come back from the Sea,

Please come back to me.



In my poetry i use alot of ocean stuff so thats y the part about the sea is in there

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wow ^.^ thats sad ahhaha......I write depressing poems sometimes I wrote one no one will ever read it though 0.0 its too persanal :P its a beautiful poem

-Taylor

you dont know my name xD so its up there

 

It was a really beautiful poem.

 

Kewl mines Brittney, my friends call me brit :)

heres another one i wrote like two mintues ago......

I foster Kittens and these two died, one in the cratte and the other one in my arms, my parents werent home at the time and i still feel like mabye i could have saved them..........

I felt you paws touch mine,

I had to say goodbye,

I knew you were sick,

This is the best way for you to die,

Your tiny body in my hands,

Your orange fur wisped away,

Your brother was dead already,

It was your time to pay,

The sickness engulfed you,

It took the twinkle in your eyes,

As your nose touched mine,

My face said the goodbye,

You closed your eyes so softly,

Your breathing stopped steadily,

Your body turned cold in my hands,

Your paw still reaching out for me

 

Beautiful, I'd tear up if I had emotion.

 

Dude,WTF??? *Shakes head*

Anyways,I liked the poem. Meh,I like to write poetry too,but I never seem to post it. *Shruggs* I think I'll start posting some of it soon,I guess....But,I digress. Nice poem!!

 

You should. I like too read other peoples poetry. :D
I feel like a blender...
*ripps up paper*
that was me being random...........

 

These poems are really pretty (:
Good wrote, you are so much better than me at this I don't even write poems xD
Good job!

 

I get upset really easily (dang you middle school *shakes fist*) and thats how i write, or make a song, and then sing and then sleep (wow, i actually have a cycle :p ) I just like to write poetry :)

 

wow....that's really nice...
And they're deep..

-800th post-

 

Thanks. I shall congratz you on your 800th post *takes out an annoying Kuzzo thing and blows it in your face*

 

these poems...they're beautiful, yet oh so sad at the same time... they're beautifully sad (:

you do good work ^^

 

Thanks. I try..........actutally not really but whatever