A Past Pain

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  1. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    No matter what you hard you try
    The pain from the past will trap you down
    Is like a lance that pierces thought your heart
    It drives you crazy, it feeds your sorrow and rage

    You just fell like forgetting everything
    You feel now like dying
    You can feel your heart quivering
    You just want to give up and go crying

    You can just turn that sadness in rage
    But it will turn in just hopeless anger
    It may be hard to forget
    You can only think in revenge

    Everyone want to forget their problems, their sadness
    They will do anything for it, even die without think again
    But it will never let go
    You can´t change what happened before

    Is the past, left it in the yesterday
    You can´t do nothing, understand
    Is hard to forget the pain you had to stake
    But is just past, is doesn´t happening now

    You can´t count of others
    You have to do it by yourself
    If you don´t get rid of the pain
    Your heart will end rotting again and again

    You just fell like killing yourself
    That is wrong, you won´t get rid of the pain
    You feel like hurting someone else
    You just feel like taking revenge

    Don´t let the rage will take over you
    It will only end in lonely sadness
    You just have to forget
    Is hard, but is the only way

    You have to stop now
    Because nobody then will be at your side
    How I know?
    Because that is how I am now

    Just understand
    You have to forget
    You can´t just erase your memory
    You just have to find a way
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    Right now I am remembering things that hurted me, and I feel like killing someone, but I feel like, I am not going to do it, and I am still a little in that "Don´t trust in nobody" phase -_-, but in a incredible way I am not depressed.
     
  2. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Nice, deep poem...but I'm glad you're not depressed...*hugs* Chaser...
     
  3. Donaut Banned

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    These are now started to get depressing to read....
     
  4. Crumpet In your shadow, I can shine!

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    chaser - im glad your getting better - nice deep poem
     
  5. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    *Hugs back* Yeah, but I am angered now.

    I was a little depressed when I wrote this one.

    Thanks... I suppose.
     
  6. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    Oh yay.

    A NOT depressing poem- it is actually an encouraging one! *claps*

    Good job! you should write more poems like this, it might brighten up the Original Works section. XD

     
  7. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Thanks, and right now I am writing one XD.
     
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