Here's another poem I wrote. Ok, hopefully someone will take this seriously! (Some of my friends who read it thought it was funny that i wrote a kh2 poem) But here it is: ~~~ A Nobody not a Somebody This…is me. A broken being A heartless shell Is me. A shattered soul A tainted whole Is me. A Nobody….Is me. Deprived of Emotions Deprived of Memories Light and Dark? Deprived of choice. I long for the day When my heart shall be mine Free to grieve, And love And hate And when I will be labeled as a “Somebody†But still, I’ll forever remain A broken being A heartless shell I’ll forever remain A shattered soul A tainted whole A Nobody not a Somebody. This…is me.
damn your good i suck i'm nerves what will ppl think of my first fan-fic when i post it O_O i like that poem is really good and kinda sad
Thanks! I was aiming for sad :) You should post your fanfic! I was SUPER nervous when i posted my Larxene's Crush story. I thought ppl would think it was stupid. But i was suprised to find people liked it! As long as you like it, it doesn't matter what others think. If you think it's good, then its probably the best story ever! :D
yeah maybe your right thanks :D you know its weird when i make sad poem they suddenly turn happy xD i dunnno whats wrong with my writing
Maybe thats just ur style of writing. Everyone has one! mine is that, when i come up with an idea for a story, i picture the characters in my head. Before i actually start to write, i see the story as like a movie in my head (i know it sounds stupid, but its really cool!) then, when i write, i just describe what i see. :) Just figure out your personal style, and go with it! Your stories will be awesome! :D
oh, jeez. i'd be crying my but my bro would probably start staring...:( Dam, that was awesome. *aplausses* (if that's how you spell it)
