A New Member... from where? (DoC fanfic)

I was doing rp on this site and this suddenly popped into my head. I mention "girl" often 'cuz this is like FFVII and FFX. (The only ones I played) No one speaks the character's name.

A New Member... from where?
Prologue​

The purple-haired girl rubs her eyes as she looks at her personal cell phone. "Meeting in Floor 0. Don't b l8.~Tsviets"

She smiles as another message came after it. "U R goin' 2 like it."

She closed up her phone as she puts on her DG suit. She sighs as she remembers she was only a teenager when the Shinra were working on a top-secret project.


"You are early." Nero greets her.

"I am early for every ceremony, Nero." She replies.

"Nice of you to join us. Now do me a favor, sweetie, and go in the front." Rosso orders in her best mocking, sugary voice.

The teenager growls and pushes herself through subordinate DG soldiers. Right in front of her is Shelke, her best friend, standing on the stage right next to Weiss, her admirer. Everyone in the Tsviets knew they were meant to be an item. Everyone fears his strength and everyone adores her split personality.

Shelke is the only who likes her real, kind side. Both of them grew up together along with her older sister. The girl has always backed Shelke up when they were in trouble and even comforted her as if she was a little sister to her.

The other three likes her devious, mischievous side. When she first arrived, to the lab, she instantly pulled pranks on the scientists to delay the process. This has become a habit as she was entertaining Rosso, Azul, and Nero. Soon, she was forced to hold a gun the very first time in her life. She nervously positions herself to use it as her finger was nearby the trigger. She closes her eyes as she pulled it. When she look up, a man was stunned stood in front of her. It looks as though he was going to take it from her. All of them, including Weiss, watch wat was going to happen next. The man was first to react and notices part of his skin ripped from his face. He panicked and ask everyone in the building where the nurse is. Her friends began to laugh as they surround her. They applauded and clapped her on the back.

The leader, however, stands right in the middle. Since she has health problems, he would visit her every day and talk about how Rosso is really into the idea and brings her a get well present, but their most favorite part is sneaking out to feel the sun shining down on their skin. Now that he's the main priority of the project, she gets a fit not seeing him on the days he promises. Once she was released from the hospital, she gave the Tsviets a bone-crushing hug.

Both of her friends offer her a hand, she smiles as she accepts the gesture.
You get the main idea she is friends of the Tsviets and I try my best not to spoil it. Is it good? Is it bad? I need comments on this fanfic.

 

Well, Tsviets = nice don't really fit. Everything else is pretty good for a beginner, if you are one.

 

This is before they were locked away in prison. So it gives the reader what they could have been like. Never played Before Crisis so I don't know that much about Azul.

 

Ok, I guess that works.

 

Dawn, I can get you a few hints about writing. I'm a writer, why do you think my title is writer child. Pm me if you need help. But not bad for a starter.