I've drawn this little character while I was away since I had nothing better to do...and believe me...I came out really good...on the paper...The scanner made it look horrible T.T It had shadows and now...it has nothing...T.T Anyways...I hope you like it...
Why does she look like she's falling foreword? That kinda throws me off. Proportions are truly off, especially with the legs. The thigh is too big for the calve, and the calve it's self is too small. Nice hands! They're very well done, but don't make wrists so skinny like the arm on the right. The eye should probably be moved i more to effect realism of the placement. The chest is kinda out of wack because there is space before it hits the breast. With yours, the breast starts a bit below the shoulders. Lower it a little. I like this one, you do have talent. Keep working though!
I agree with Hissora, but there's another thing that bothers me a bit... >.< Its akward to saw for me but....Around her skirt area, *Cough* the lower back of her >.< Is a little off, it looks...Strange to me, even though Im not exsperianced. It just does. Other than that, its a wonderful picture and very skilled. Keep it up! ^-^
Thank you so much for your advice and appreciation ^^ I'll try to do what you said, it sure look a lot better that way =D once again, Thank you so much!! =) P.S. You're the first one to say I draw good hands...I think they are all...messed up...xD
This is actually a really good sketch of an amine character, I must say [ considering that I can't draw anime characters out of creativity for shyte T_T]. I'll give you an HONEST critique... However, I do agree with Hissora... She seems to be falling forward, and the proportions are off. The shoulders need to be broader and without some shading at the neck area, the point where the head and neck meet seem a little awkward. The neck also looks a little thick, but it's probably because of the shoulders, and her chest... I think some shading are needed to show where... they... are? O.o' I mean, her chest seem to be facing in a slightly different direction then her body. Her eyes, are actually REALLY good, and pretty, I like it. The most superficial arm looks really good, but the other arm, well... ehh. Now her legs... O_O Those are some pretty big thighs, [thunder thighs!] and her calves are too small. It's mainly the proportions you are having problems in, otherwise it's really good. 8D Work on proportions, and you'll do fine.
It looks really good! :O I didn't know you could draw that well! Even though there are some problems with the propotions, I still love it!! Keep up the great work sis! I totally love this character made by you ;-)
my only problems with the picture is that the hair looks a little electricuted and the proportions are off a little (like the legs). other than that i think it looks reallygood i especially like the expression! keep it up ^^
