A new beginning ... Organization Re:V

This is the first post ive done, so be nice!!! lol :yell: I made this all up before I joined up here, so I hope you enjoy!!! The story is still in progression stages and i wanted your advice on it before I continue!!! Also it MAY contain spoilers!!!

This is not the officaial prologue yet, this is just an indicator to the series and what will happen, the main character profiles will be posted soon!!!

Basically, as we all remember, Organization XIII were all killed by Sora & Co. :sideways: *Damn you Sora!!!*

During the events of KH1, Ansem, the heartless of Xehanort, was in contact with Xemnas, the nobody of Xehanort. Ansem told Xemnas of Sora and his mighty power, and warned him to be ready if he went after him. After Ansems' defeat, Xemnas ordered the newly aquired Marluxia to gather five beings to train in Castle Oblivion with the rest the Organization.
When Sora came to Catle Oblivion, Marluxia had taught them extremely well. Later, he and Larxene conspired to take over the Organization and use these five as warriors. But when Sora got closer to Marluxia, he implanted the five with an extreme knowledge and put them to rest in five sleeping containers. (not unlike Sora's) They awoke one year later, approx. 1 week before Sora. The five fled to the world they orriginated from and they set up Organization Re:V. This organizations' main goal is to revive all members of Organization XIII by using the information provided to them by Marluxia, The knowledge of how to revive a nobody from the Darkness ...

Hope you all liked and please tell me if you want to hear more!!!!! Thanx!!!!

 

interesting plot, run with it.

 

Thanx!!! I have most of the storyline in my head but i didnt want to ruin it by putting it down!!!! hehe!!! :D So ill post the fivemain characters soon. Am just putting finishing touches to them!!!!!

Name: Vixadd
Nickname: The Wandering Woods
Gender: Male
Element: Wood, Earth, Plants
Weapon: Glaive (1, controls foliage)
Appearance: Slight tanned skin, Shoulder-length dark brown hair with green strikes, Piercing green eyes, average yet muscular, chilly and eerily calm voice, Organization XIII cloak.

Well thats Vixadd. So if you like him give me some feedback!!!! Also, Im not a very good artist so if anyone would like to send me their interpretation of this charcter, by all means, send it to me!!!!!!

 

Here are the other 4 main characters. Hope you like them. Im still tring to draw them, if anyone wants to try, be my guest!!!!!! The Prologue will be up soon!!!!

2. Name: Persixenna
Nickname: The Youthful Phoenix
Gender: Female
Element: Fire
Weapon: Dagger (2, red, controls fire)
Appearance: Pale skin, chest-length Blonde hair, Hazel eyes, slim yet toned, soft and creamy voice

3. Name: Denidax
Nickname: The Sorcerer’s Illusionist
Gender: Male
Element: Foresight
Weapon: Glass Ball (1, creates illusions of whatever he wants)
Appearance: Average colored skin, Short auburn hair (may include fringe???), grey eyes but one slightly blue, slim and slender, deep and menacing voice

4. Name: Xonvirok
Nickname: The Iron Binder
Gender: Male
Element: Metal
Weapon: Whip (As many as 3, silver, malleable)
Appearance: Nice tanned skin, Short black hair (see Zac Efron hair), bright blue eyes with a touch of red in one, Muscular but slender, cool and mesmerizing voice


5. Name: Zixinion
Nickname: The Atlantean Conqueror
Gender: Male
Element: Water
Weapon: Trident (one, controls water, extends on command)
Appearance: Dark skin (not Negro), long blue hair (in a ponytail), dark blue eyes, muscular and strong, deep and aggressive voice

 

come on prologue! Let me know when its up

 

Prologue​

Light and Dark … For many eons, both the forces of the Light and the forces of the Darkness have waged war upon one another. Whether it is a war for continents or even a measly piece of land, Both Light and Dark have continued their war. But not many people stop to consider the land of the in-between, the Twilight. A place where neither Light nor Dark prevails, but where both reside in equality.
Through out the centuries, the land of the Twilight has been calm and restful until not very long ago. A group of cloaked beings, creatures of the Twilight themselves, came and forged the land into a place of terror. The land was hidden and in it, a few of this so called “Organization” set up base. And thus Castle Oblivion was born.
During this time a great darkness spread across worlds and severed the invisible ties between all planets and they became connected. The Keyblade Master, Sora, and his two friends, Kairi & Riku, set out of their home world of the Destiny Islands and went out into the unknown. Along the way, the three friends became separated and continued alone. But Sora encountered two new companions, Donald and Goofy, the court magician and leader of the Royal Guards to his Majesty King Mickey of Disney Castle.
Sora had to battle the great Ansem, who was actually the heartless of the true Ansem’s apprentice, Xehanort. Eventually Sora was reunited with Riku and Kairi, but was forced apart again to save the worlds. During this time, the Organization was scouting new members to protect them from Sora. And five, in particular, were being trained as their guardians.
After his adventures throughout the worlds, sealing the links to the other worlds, and the great battle with the so-called “Ansem”, he winded up in the land of the in-between. He searched this mysterious land for a way to the Realm of Light, to free King Mickey and Riku, only to find Castle Oblivion. Once he entered he was told by the Organization that someone dear to him was somewhere in this perplexing castle. Sora, unaware of the Organization’s treachery, climbed its heights and overcame its obstacles until he reached the top. But as he climbed and searched he lost his memories and began anew. He defeated the members of the Organization who resided in the upper floors of Castle Oblivion. Marluxia, the Leader of the Castle, hid away these beings and put them into a slumber for three years.
After the battle with Marluxia, Sora was spared his memories, and his life, by the witch Namine, who was being held against her will by the Organization, and was put to sleep for one year to regain the memories he lost. During his slumber, Roxas had joined the ranks of Organization XIII and was put to sleep when Sora was awakened.
After one year, Sora and his two companions awoke with no memories of what took place in Castle Oblivion. During the Keyblade master’s new journeys, the cloaked beings, now officially known as Organization XIII, thought that the five warriors they had trained perished in Castle Oblivion and continued on their original plans.
Three years later these five warriors awoke and learned of their master’s downfall and set out to continue what the Organization taught them.
The Five Warriors lives will be explained throughout this story, from their Origins to their Ends. And it all started on a small planet with a remarkable past and a questionable future. The Land of the Five Lights.

(The prologue may be repeated in the five warrior’s stories)

 

i like how your prologue has a feel of a good introduction, namely it feels like I have Morgan Freeman narrating it to me haha. look forward to reading more

 

Ha Ha!!! lol!!! Thats really kewl!!! I oictured Ian McKellin!!!!! :rockdover: Im hopinto have Vixadd's story up 2morow!!!!!!!!!! Im still working on Persixenna's!!!

 

Scene 1 – Chuschi Island​

Vixadd was sat high upon the tallest branch of the Tsuchi Tree, which was on the Hill to the Sea, that he visited every day. He was gazing at the setting of the Sun and the rising of the five moons. Chi, the first of the five moons, was a deep green color and everyday Vixadd would make his way to this tree and climb to the tallest branch and gaze endlessly at the rising of the moons, at Chi in particular.
Being only sixteen and an outcast with no family to speak of whatsoever, Vixadd felt undeniably lonely at every point in his tormented life. He had never had a true family to begin with anyway. Sixteen years ago, a basket washed up on the shores of the beach. The basket was made of Green vines and inside of it a small baby lay inside a swaddling of cloth and leaves. Only the baby, cloth and foliage resided in this basket.
As Vixadd gazed out to the clear sapphire blue ocean, the green glow of Chi was spanning over him and a strong ocean breeze was hitting hard against the boys face high in the tree tops. Vixadd was lost in thought, thoughts of escape and finding where he truly belonged.
“Hmm. I wish I could go out there. Explore the other islands.†He said to himself, as if speaking to someone who was not there. “But the paths to the Godai Islands were blocked by the Lord of the Lights many, many years ago.â€
At this depressing thought, Vixadd jumped off the branch and landed feet first on the ground. This was remarkable as the tree branch he jumped off was over eight feet tall. He walked sullenly down to the beach and as he did so his dark brown hair swayed in the winds, the green strikes that penetrated the deep brown staying immobilized on the side of his head. His jeans flicked about wildly and his hood gave little motion in the wind. His hands were inside his jacket pockets with gloves on each hand.
He walked onto the wooden pier that stretched out into the water and sat down at the end, removing his boots and socks and letting his feet slip over the edge and penetrate the coldness of the water. An icy chill wriggled its way through his body, but Vixadd sat unfazed by the sudden change in his surroundings. He was happy to sit there content in his own private world. A heavy breath escaped Vixadds lungs.
“This is great. Just me, myself and I.†He said in a quite relaxed sort of way. “No worries, no problems. No nothing. I can feel free here …â€
A sudden darkness enveloped Vixadd, he couldn’t breathe or see. Panic spread through his body and he jumped. Next thing he knew he was in the ocean, trying to catch his breath, but he couldn’t. A black figure stood on the beach before him, standing motionless. Vixadd tried to signal for help but it was useless. The Figure stayed on the beach, its hood up and coat swaying. One last attempt was made by Vixadd before giving in to the ocean. He closed his eyes and the last thing he saw was the hooded person on the beach, unmoved and uncaring.
When he awoke he was lying on the beach. His jacket had been missing and his jeans were ripped in several areas. Everything was a blur; the last thing he remembered was the hooded person on the beach. He raised his head and back and sat up. He swerved his head around to try and find the person who had taken him from the ocean.
As his head turned round, not a single person was in sight, not even the stranger. When he turned back around a woman’s face was staring him in the eyes. She had short blonde hair with two antennae like parts to her head. A shimmering pale complexion that looked like silk and luscious lips. Her green eyes pierced his body, down to the bottom of his soul even.
“Whoa!!!†Vixadd blurted out, and fell backwards. “Who are you? Where did you come from? You weren’t there a second ago, were you?â€
The beautiful lady gave a mild laugh and smiled at him. “Slow down, your only out of the water.†She patted his head and Vixadd felt suddenly calmer. “I’m Larxene and yes, I was here a second ago.†Larxene stood up tall again and continued to speak to the drenched Vixadd. “So what happened, how did you end up in the ocean?â€
“Well, I don’t really know. One minute I was sitting on the pier and next thing I know I’m gasping for air! It was really weir-†For the first time, Vixadd had given Larxene’s lower body a thorough looking at. She was wearing a long black coat. He jumped up and edged back within’ a minute. “You were on the beach, in the coat. Why didn’t you help me?â€
“I wasn’t on the beach†Larxene explained as Vixadd backed away from her. “I just arrived. Now, why don’t you come with me†She extended her hand out to him.
“Eh … I don’t know … uh …†He replied nervously, continuing backwards. The sweat was dripping off him and he was starting to get really frightened.
“We can give you anything you want†She smiled sinisterly. “I haven’t got all day you know! Come on! Let’s GO!†The way her emotions changed so quickly and drastically perplexed Vixadd. He was frightened beyond belief, but something about what she was saying intrigued him.
“Come on! Yield to the darkness, you know as well as I that you yearn for power, to escape this retched dump! Come with me and all your dreams will come true!†She said as she continued her, so far, futile attempts at bringing him with her. “Unlimited power! Come on!â€
“If I do go with you†Vixadd began “What will happen?â€
Another seductive smile and laugh from Larxene. “No harm will be brought upon you while I’m with you. All we want id for you to -â€
“Again with the “weâ€! What is this “we†and who are you?†Vixadd was up against the Tsuchi Tree now and his sweating was beginning to fade. “Tell me!â€
“Ha! I am not at liberty to discuss that at this moment.†She said as if imitating an FBI Agent. “But deep down you know what to do.â€
She was right. Somewhere deep inside of him, he knew that this was were he was meant to be. “Alright. Let’s go. But if anything happens -†He was cut off sharply by Larxene.
“Don’t worry, yield to the darkness of your heart.†She finished speaking and held out her hand once more. Vixadd went to grab her hand. As their hands met, He felt a strange yet empowering surge of power run through his veins. As if he was just struck by lightning.
Everything faded away and he and Larxene were in complete and utter darkness. Strange voices emanated from all around him, as if trying to encircle him. He felt immense pressure building around him. He was going to explode. And yet he didn’t.
After what seemed like an eternity or torture, He and Larxene were standing in a circular room. The room was quite large and very tall. Several high chairs made of white marble stood at different heights in a circular ring. All but five of these chairs were filled and there was a gap in the arc of the circle, like a chair was missing. He also noticed four other men in hoods standing beside Larxene and four young people beside them like him. Vixadd was beginning to worry. What if they were to be sacrificed or something!
“Order! Order!†The Man in the chair directly in front of Vixadd had begun speaking. “Now, Larxene, status report on the boyâ€
“Yes Xemnas, sir†Larxene has seemed different know than before. Vixadd suspected that he must be their leader for Larxene to speak to him in such a manner, compared to the way she acted before. “The boy is from Chuschi Island. He’s sixteen, tall, handsome, no family whatsoever and he arrived in a basket made of vines.â€
“He looks a bit on the scrawny side if you ask me†announced a slender man with an x shaped scar in between his golden eyes. “I mean, look at him!â€
“You’re one to talk Saix, look at you, you’re skin and bone!†retorted the fiery haired man seated next to Saix.
“Oh yeah Axel! Well at least I don’t fancy the new guy!†Saix replied and the whole room began to laugh quietly, even Larxene gave a slight giggle.
“His name is ROXAS! And I do NOT fancy him!†Axel put up his hood and sat back into his marble chair.
“Well. If you are all quite finished. Good job, Larxene. That’s one down, four to go.†As he spoke, he stared up and down the row of people. “Take him to Vexen’s Lab. I’m sure he’ll be ready by now.†A deadly sneer crept across his face as Larxene began to transport them once more, this time to Vexen’s Lab. The last thing he heard was Xemnas calling out someone’s name, Xig something.
Again, the searing pressure amounted around Vixadd in the Darkness, his eyeballs threatened to pop out of their sockets once more when the pain suddenly evaporated. When he opened his eyes again, he saw that he was standing in a brilliant white room. Hundreds upon hundreds of glass vials and test tubes were on shelves and desks among other things. Sweet aromatic smells were coming from a pot in the center of the room and some rotten odors from a vial on the desk closest to the sweet smelling pot.
In a matter of seconds, Larxene pulled him arm so hard it nearly left its socket. She dragged Vixadd by the arm across the white tiled floor over to an arched doorway. Larxene opened the door, inside was a dark, dank room with a broom propped on the wall. She threw Vixadd into the small cupboard like room and he fell to the floor. The vial Vixadd eyed earlier was taken by Larxene and she threw it into his lap.
“Drink that†She said, as she fixed her hair. “It’ll put you to sleep.â€
“No way! Not a chance! I’m not drinking that!†Vixadd said sternly and stubbornly. “No way!â€
“What did I tell you earlier, nothing bad will happen to you while I’m here, now drink it!†She said this with such forcefulness that Vixadd drank it in a flash. After he had swallowed this vile liquid, he immediately became drowsy and disorientated. He began to sway a little, as if he was tipsy.
Someone had arrived out of the darkness like Larxene had done. A man with fading blonde hair and a draping black cloak, which seemed to be standard issue for this organization. He was shouting about something, it was so loud in Vixadds ears, he felt as if his head was about to explode everywhere.
As the potion started to kick in, Vixadds back fell to the wall and his head fell limp. The last things he saw were the strange man and Larxene arguing and they turned around to look at Vixadd before he dozed off to a deep slumber.

 

this is awesome, i really like it. But what will happen now? The suspense is stiffling.

 

It's a good thing suspense CAN'T KILL ME!!!