I start off with a cute remark Something only I would notice I describe your picturesque face And being with you makes me feel Then you join in and sing the same about me This should be a duet A song between lovers This should be a duet But it's missing a voice It's missing your voice I continue to express my feelings for you I go on and on about you Then you join in and confess your feelings for me You sing of our memories And the last line in our song we sing in harmony This should be a duet A song between lovers This should be a duet But it's missing a voice It's missing your voice We sing our love won't falter We sing our love will last And we sing in harmony "I Love You" This should be a duet A song between lovers This should be a duet But it's missing a voice This should be a duet A song between lovers This should be a duet But it's missing a voice It's missing your voice Oh, and the bridge is supposed to be sarcastic in the way that I depict the "perfect" relationship :)
I actually liked it, It was pretty good, and I see no problem why other people shouldn't... It was great... Good job...XD
Sarcastic or not, the bridge had a rather melancholy tone to it. The repetition almost gave it a voice of its own. Great job with that.
