A Kiss, a Lie, and a Deception (Chapter 2)

Discussion in 'Archives' started by DiZ The Wandering Soul, Apr 21, 2007.

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Soo...what do you think so far?

  1. I like it! You're doing good! ^_^

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  2. You're doing ok.....

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  3. So-so,

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  4. ehh...not really

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  5. no, I don't like it

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  6. Who honestly cares?

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  1. DiZ The Wandering Soul Merlin's Housekeeper

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    heheheheheh......gomennasai ^_^; I've been putting this off for waaaaaay too long. I've been up to my neck in all kinds of stuff recently, but now, at what? midnight? I finally have the time to get to work, I'm gonna hate myself in the morning for working on this at bloody midnight, but hey, might as well right? So, I hope you all enjoy this, tommarow though, I'm gonna be all like, "you better enjoy this!!!!!! :mad: :mad: :mad:" But, I digress, enjoy ^^


    Hating myself every second of this,
    DiZ



    Chapter 2: Jealousy



    Sora, after a nice hearty 3 plates of waffles, (AN: I still love waffles :D :p ) hopped into his boat and rowed out to the Islands. When he arrived, he saw Riku was already there, sitting in his usual tree.

    "Hey Riku!" Sora cried cheerfully from the pier.

    Riku simply glanced and continued to stare out upon the contently blue sea. Sora ran over from the pier, jumped into his tree and plopped down next to him. "Something wrong?"


    Riku shrugged, "Just thinking..."

    Sora shook his head and sighed, "I told you, you've been hanging out in darkness too long, you gotta start thinkin' positive." Sora smiled his pretty much trademarked smile (AN: I'm pretty sure Square Enix has the paperwork for it somewhere...:D ) Riku couldn't help but grin himself, "You're right Sora," Riku admitted.


    Sora grinned, then got serious, "So....what were you thinking about?"

    Riku shook his head, "It's nothing Sora, forget it." "Come on Riku! I wanna know!" Riku sighed, "Fine... It was about Kairi," As Riku began to explain, Kairi had just arrived to the Island, she ducked under the pier in order to overhear Riku. "Well, We both have kinda grasped the idea that Kairi like's us both yea?" Sora nodded. "Well, she has to pick one of us, and well, I was thinking about it, and she's probably gonna pick you." Sora almost jumped out of the tree, "No way Riku, you're just being modest." On the inside, Sora was practically screaming with excitement, If Riku thinks it, it's pretty much bound to happen! "No I'm being serious," Riku countered, "I mean, take some time to think about it. I turned to darkness while you stayed in the light, I gave myself up to Xehanort's Heartless, Then when she saw me, I always kept at a distance, to keep her from seeing my darkness. You were always on the side of light, she gave you her Thalassa Shell Lucky Charm, and you and her hit it off right after you first came to Hallow Bastion, you're pretty much bound to win her over."

    Sora sat in scilence as he took all of what his best friend said in. Kairi slowly crept away from the two and snuck into the Secret Place. She sat down under the picture of her and Sora giving each other Paopu Fruits and buried her head into her hands. This was becoming more and more complicated by the minute. Everything Riku said was true, but his darkness also made him so mysterious. Sure Sora was the Keyblade Master of the Light, and sure Sora kept true to his word about the lucky charm and coming back to her. She just didn't know who to pick. They were both great guys, it just made everything that much harder.


    Sora had taken his boat home to reflect on what Riku had said, well that's what he said anyway. Riku stayed in his tree, watching the tranquil blue waves lightly splash upon the shore. Why can't life be that easy? Riku thought. just splashing upon the shore, then leaving. It just repeats, nothing hurts, nothing changes, nothing confuses you, you just stay blue and do as life intended you for. He stared into his right hand, (AN: I think that's his sword hand, never could tell >_<) The hand that, under the influence of darkness, wrecked so many lives, killed so many, and destroyed so much. So why must I hurt? Why must I be confused? He sighed, Why Can't Kairi like me?



    She Can, A voice echoed out.

    Riku jumped up, his Souleater sprang into his hand, "Who said that? Where are you? Who are you?" He asked, halve controlled by hate, halve by fear.

    Merely one who walks the same path you do. It rang out again, One who walks the Road to the Dawn

    "What do you want?" Riku yelled, nearly blinded by fury that someone, or something was toying with him.


    You are Scared, One Can't be sure of what one is facing if one is blinded by fear. The voice chuckled, You Turned yourself to darkness, all in pursuit of escape, you escaped, and returned to your prison. So, what ambitions do you have now? hopes for Affection, for Friendship? For Love?


    Riku Growled, he could feel rage building up all in him.

    If one cannot have a ambition, a goal, if you will, then what is the point of existance? you have no point, no answer to questions if you have no leads to follow, no hope to obtain anything if you have no set destination. You have no chance of ever winning over Kairi...


    "Shut up!" Riku screamed.


    The voice chuckled, You may fear it, and refuse to believe it, but darkness still resides in your heart. You will hear from me again. A slight silouette of a figure appeared before Riku. In his rage swang his Souleater at the silouette, accomplishing nothing. He sighed as the Souleater disappeared from his hand. just who does that guy think he is!?!? Riku thought angerly, better question residing, who WAS that guy?


    Do you have a guess? betcha you don't!!! or do you??? ahh well, I'm done, and extremely tired.....*yawn* just use the poll, comment, and enjoy...


    I'm sleepy...
    DiZ
     
  2. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Nicely done. I'm enjoying this story. I found an error though.:

    If one cannot have a ambition, a goal, if you will, then what is the point of existance? you have no point, no answer to questions if you have no leads to follow, no hope to obtain anything if you have no set destination. You have no chance of ever winning over Kairi...

    should be: an
     
  3. DiZ The Wandering Soul Merlin's Housekeeper

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    eheheheheheheh....... well, what can I say, it's 1:00 AM, I sometimes mess up this early in the morning... this is actually the only time i've stayed up 'till 1:00 Am to work on somethin' >_>;

    and I'm glad you are enjoying this, as I am enjoying writing it. one question though, did I spell the first word to the Lucky charm Kairi gave Sora right?

    I spelled it Thalessa, I'm not exactly sure on it...


    nevermind, I was reading one of my Kingdom Hearts Manga books and found it, it's actually spelled, "Thalassa" I was off by one letter >_<
     
  4. Soushirei 運命の欠片

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    Just a friendly reminder that you're not supposed to have polls in Creativity Corner threads anymore. These polls appear on the main site, and it's sort of disruptive.

    Sticky thread here
     
  5. DiZ The Wandering Soul Merlin's Housekeeper

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    oh...umm i'm sorry sir, I didn't know...my apologies
     
  6. Soushirei 運命の欠片

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    Don't think anything of it right now. It's going into effect 24 hours from now. I just thought I'd let you know about the sticky.

    Sorry for being off-topic.
     
  7. DiZ The Wandering Soul Merlin's Housekeeper

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    hey, it's your job to inform people when they're not following the rules ^^ completely understandable.
     
  8. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    hey i think it's good so far

    :eek: do i dare try to guess who it is? *thinks* no never mind that wouldn't make sence...or would it
     
  9. DiZ The Wandering Soul Merlin's Housekeeper

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    I'm glad you enjoy it ^^

    If you read chapter 1 as well, you may get a better idea...
     
  10. Shuhbooty moon child

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    i loved it but i think riku was being nice on purpus to get sora alll happy but then ture on him to get kairi hahahaha*evil laugh*