A Kingdom Hearts Story --- After KH2!! "THE ADDICTION"

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  1. ♦Demon♥Angel♦ Gummi Ship Junkie

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    *sniff, sniff* I'll try not to!
    Lol!

    *rocks out to the band \m/*

    RETURN OF THE REALLY BAD JOKE!! XD
     
  2. Juicy Chaser

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    Owww gee guys, sorry to disappoint. But I have a HUGE load of things going on at home at the moment, so I don't think Ill be able to finish the update tonight or tomorrrow. Ill try my best, but no update anytime in the next 24 hours.

    As if anyone cares lol.

    I just didn't get round to it. Too many things going on, sorry.

    Speaking of which, i gtg. I managed to sneak on the computer while my parents were out. But they are coming back! And Im not allowed online for now.

    OWS out!
     
  3. daisydog2 Destiny Islands Resident

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    NOOO! Why!? I've been dying to read tht chapter! The only thing I've been doing to entertain myself is watching reruns of Criss Angel: Mindfreak!
     
  4. Roxas24Sora King's Apprentice

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    ObssesedWithSora....this is awesome.....good job!!!:D
     
  5. xanthae Merlin's Housekeeper

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    OMG He died NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

    anyway good Job and can't wait for the next chapter.
     
  6. ♦Demon♥Angel♦ Gummi Ship Junkie

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    One thing: OMG THAT VINCENT!!!! ^^
    Ok, I'm done. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, WHY OBESSESD WHY?!?!? *sobsobsobsob*
     
  7. Juicy Chaser

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    Chapter... erm... Oh Ive lost count =]

    Im flattered, but there's a ton of other fanfics out there. Mine's just one of them! And your wish is my command; here is the next chapter!

    Hey, thanks. :)


    *Looks stricken* What's wrong with Mr. Valentine? Vincent is cool... right?

    Aww, Ill change it if you like. I have a cool one of sasuke to use xDD



    Chapter 19​






    “Guys! Hurry up! What are you doing in there?â€

    Selphie banged her fists against the wooden door to the living room. For some absurd reason the boys had locked themselves in there. Selphie and Shell were about to go upstairs to find Kairi, Riku and Sora with the cleaning stuff when they had realised the boys had disappeared. Shell had snorted when she had discovered they were locked in the living room.

    “See,†she had said, “if I had a sick mind, I’d say that they locked the door because they were-â€

    “I don’t want to know, Shell!†Selphie had replied hurriedly.

    Now they were outside the living room door waiting for Wakka and Tidus to emerge. Selphie was about to knock the door again when the handle began to turn.

    The boys walked out. Shell had to do a double take. Selphie’s jaw dropped almost out of it’s socket.

    Wakka was wearing some kind of ridiculous apron with frilly sides. With humour Shell saw that it was a violent shade of pink, and had a rubber duck printed on one of the pockets. Elbow-length gloves rose up his arms. In one hand he had a mop, in the other a dust pan and brush. Tidus was dressed the same; except that his outfit was purple. One glance and the girls were in hysterics. Selphie clutched her sides helplessly. Shell gasped for breath; she was already on the marble floor.

    Tidus held up a feather duster meekly. “You wanted cleaners?†he said, his face turning an adorable shade of pink. Shell would’ve hugged him except she was helpless on the floor.

    “Hey, man, you look hawwwwwt.†Wakka said, raising his hand for a high five.

    “You too, dude!†He replied and clasped his hand. Finally the girls managed to stop laughing. Selphie wiped tears from her eyes.

    “Let’s go up.†Tidus said and began to lead the way up the stairs.

    Selphie turned the corner first and bumped straight into a bedraggled looking Clara. Tidus and Wakka had to double take; the last time they had seen the teen had been when she was curled up feebly in a bed. Selphie and Shell hadn’t seen Clara since the party.

    “Clara!†Wakka exclaimed and for some reason held onto Clara’s arms. He dropped his hands suddenly when he remembered Selphie was next to him. But he almost caught his breath when he saw Clara close up. Her face was… Unrecognisable up close. Broken veins surfaced close to the skin. Faint bruises threatened to become dark and swell up. Cuts etched every surface of her face. Wakka restrained himself from recoiling and instead kept himself neutral.

    Clara nodded at the others. There was something wrong with her; her eyes looked weary and it wasn’t just because of her wounds. Shakily Clara brought a hand up and touched her cheek. Blood oozed out at the touch. Shell let out a tiny gasp and covered her mouth.

    “I need to talk to you guys, okay?†she said. Lightly she flicked a piece of purple hair out of her eyes.

    They all nodded except Tidus. “About what?†he muttered darkly.

    “Riku.â€

    “What? I thought you said he was better now, even without our help. You found a cure, right? Right, Clara?â€

    Clara turned to Selphie who was talking agitatedly. “I’ll explain in a second.†she said and motioned to a door. She turned away, but not after everyone had seen a tear well up in her eyes.


    ****



    “He wouldn’t have wanted you like this, Sora. He wouldn’t want to see you like this.â€

    Kairi half raised her hand to hold Sora’s hand but stopped herself. Sora had shrunk away from any contact. He hadn’t said a word since he had entered the room. Kairi could understand that he was upset, but Kairi was getting upset herself that Sora wasn’t talking to her. And seeing her loved one so sad upset her more than she realised.

    “He.. He would have wanted you to get on with life. He would have wanted you to…to…â€

    Sora sat motionless. Kairi gingerly rose from her chair and sat next to Sora on the bed. Once again, he didn’t move. Kairi ever so slowly wrapped her arms around him in a small display of affection. He didn’t react. Kairi brought her hands to his head and pushed his head to the side so it rested on her shoulder.

    He’s gone inside, Kairi thought, just gone…

    “Sora…?â€

    He made no move to push her off, so she hugged him tightly, her arms around his neck. Gently she planted a soft kiss on his lips.

    Suddenly Sora reacted, standing up and grabbing Kairi by the waist. To Kairi’s fear he began to growl and suddenly he flung her across the room. She flew through the air and came to a thudding stop when she slammed into the wall. Black lights scarred her eyesight and a ringing sound filled her ears. She had no breath in her to scream out.

    Through tear filled eyes she saw that Sora was standing over her. To her alarm she saw that the Keyblade was in his hands. Sora had a look in his eyes that she had never seen before. A look like thunder.

    “Sora! Wha-??†she stammered, finding some breath.

    “Shut up!†He snarled, his eyes aflame. “SHUT UP FOR ONCE!â€

    Kairi gasped and backed up against the wall. She never thought she’d ever see Sora like this. Ever. It was nothing like him.

    “WHAT ARE YOU THINKING???†He screamed, spraying her with spit. “WHAT IS THIS…†He wiped his lips where she had kissed him. “ WHAT IS THIS GOING TO DO?? NOTHING, THAT’S WHAT!!â€

    He brought his leg back and kicked the wall beside her head. Kairi let out a tiny scream and began to shake. Never in her life had she been so afraid. Sora bellowed and viciously swung the Keyblade around in the air.

    “Please… Sora…†Kairi managed to whimper. He snarled and began to shout again, even louder.

    “NO!!! YOU DON’T….. YOU DON’T UNDERSTAND!!!â€

    Kairi felt tears gathering in her eyes.

    Sora suddenly stopped, panting with exhaustion. Sweat clouded his face. His fists were bunched up, his knuckles pearly white.

    “He’s never, EVER coming back, Kairi! Never! He’s gone! He’s… my best friend! Gone… GONE!!!â€

    Kairi thought he had stopped, but suddenly he rounded on her.

    “AND YOU!!!†He snarled, showing his teeth. The good-looking teen Kairi knew and loved was gone, he had been replaced by a terrifying figure consumed by grief. At any other time Kairi would have felt pity, but right now she was just filled with horror and fear.

    “YOU! YOU THINK… YOU THINK THIS! THIS WILL HELP? YOU THINK THIS WILL BRING HIM BACK???!!!???†Sora pointed to his mouth, shaking with anger.

    Kairi’s whole body shook as she clung to the wall behind her. Sora came closer, one hand on the Keyblade, one outstretched towards Kairi’s face. Suddenly, with a roar he brought his weapon back and swung it broadly. The next few moments seemed to happen in slow motion. Kairi screwed up her eyes as the blade flew towards her. Screaming, she closed her eyes and waited for the worst. Any second and the Keyblade would smash into her face. And smash her heart.

    But nothing happened. Filled with fear, Kairi opened her eyes just a little bit. Everything seemed dark. She quickly realised it was because Sora’s face was directly in front of hers. The Keyblade was gone, to Kairi’s relief.

    Sora had decided not to hit her. That, in the least, was some comfort.

    “Th-Th-Thankyou…†Kairi whispered, when Sora stood up and turned around. As soon as the words leapt off her tongue she knew they had been a mistake. Sora whipped around and in a flash grabbed Kairi by the collar of her shirt. It was a navy polo shirt she had borrowed off Clara. Sora yanked her up and bashed her against the wall. The fabric cut into the tender skin of her throat.

    Quickly Sora whipped away his hand and replaced it with the other, choking her. His sweaty hands gripped her windpipe tightly, crushing her neck. Kairi choked and struggled, suddenly realising she could no longer breathe. Kicking out with her legs was useless. The room began to spin; yet Sora’s face remained still. It was as if the only thing in existence was her and the one she claimed to love.

    Sora brought his face up close to hers, eye to eye. Kairi stared into the limitless blue. Rage filled every corner. Kairi felt tears creeping out of her own. She wished that Sora would find just a hint of compassion and let her go. Suddenly all was quiet and the only thing she could hear was the taunting breaths of Sora and the shallow beating of her own heart. Blood pounded through her head. Sweat dribbled down Sora’s cheeks. Her heart gave one last desperate beat. Sora’s eyes widened and his sight lowered. Then suddenly the grip around her throat came loose and she fell with a deafening boom onto the floor. Through spinning vision Kairi saw Sora leave the room, then she became unconscious.

    *****

    Sora sprinted out of the door and slammed it behind him. Tears threatened to overwhelm him. A burden almost too heavy to bear was settling over his heart. And now a terrible guilt over what he had done to Kairi was eating away at his insides.

    Almost falling down the stairs, Sora skidded out of the front door and out into Clara’s enormous garden. Dodging between the flowerbeds he wiped away the sweat dancing off his face.

    “Got to.. Get away..†he mumbled and picked up speed. Soon he had reached the main road and was flying across the gravel. Judging by the height of the moon it was the early hours off the morning. The moon seemed to stare at Sora disapprovingly. Perhaps it was laughing at his blood-soaked clothes and bandages around his mid-half.

    Riku…

    Before Sora realised where he was going his legs had carried him to the beach. He jolted to a halt just in front of the water. The waves were calm and soothed his racing mind. The unbearable burden seemed to fade a bit when he heard the hush of the water. But thinking this Sora felt even worse.

    The pain may pause, he thought, but it never goes away.

    Sora’s tears hissed as they hit the sand.


    *****


    Clara handed Selphie a tissue. Her spunky friend hadn’t stopped crying since Clara had told her the bad news. Wakka had taken it badly, too. His hands had shook and Clara thought she had glimpsed tears. Tidus hadn’t said a word. Shell was just moved; she hadn’t known Riku before his evil days.

    “Here,†Clara murmured and put her arm around Selphie. But she brought it back faster than lightning when she heard somebody walking across the gravel outside of the house. Moving briskly to the window, Clara saw the bright moon lighting up the sky. Then she saw the figures crossing the garden; and realised in alarm that it was her parents.

    “Who is it?†Tidus spoke for the first time.

    “My parents!†Clara squeaked. Shell joined her looking out from behind the curtains.

    “We haven’t had a chance to clean!†Shell said and looked around the room in dismay.

    Clara’s thoughts raced. Why were her parents home at this time of the night? And why did her dad look so angry. Then a light bulb lit inside her head. Balloons from the party were still tied to the outside of the house. An obvious icon for her parents.

    “You guys…†she began. Everyone turned to her. “You need to get out. I mean, now.â€

    “Are you sure you don’t want us to explain with you?†Selphie said quietly. Clara shook her head and motioned to the door.

    “Leave out the back,†Clara whispered, “keep it down and don’t let my parents spot you!â€

    “Aye aye!†Shell said and she quickly escorted the others out of the room.

    Once alone, Clara looked in the mirror. In a moment she would have to face her parents. She’d have a lot of explaining to do. Most importantly, why her face was a scarred mess, and why the floors of her house were soaked in blood.

    *****



    “This way!†Shell said and began to run down the corridor, the others on her tail. All of a sudden she stopped and Tidus tripped over her feet. Sprawled on the carpet, he twisted around to confront Shell. But Shell beat him to it.

    “We forgot about Sora and Kairi!â€

    They all gasped then ran back down the hallway. Tidus scrambled to his feet and caught up. Reaching the door, Wakka flung it open. To his surprise Sora wasn’t there. Just a barely conscious Kairi, groaning and slumped against the wall.

    “Kairi!†Wakka said and rushed to her side. “What happened to you?â€

    Kairi tried to speak but nothing happened. She was too weak. With uttermost care Wakka lifted her limp body up ancarried her out of the room. There was no sign of Sora, so the group hurried downstairs. Selphie was filled with confusion over what had happened to Sora and Kairi, so she ran alongside Wakka and held her friend’s shaky hand.

    “It’s okay,†Selphie said, hiding her own tears, “everything will turn out just fine.â€

    Kairi squeezed her best friend’s hand back, her world utterly over.


    Sorry for the long delay.. what did you guys think??
     
  8. P E A N U T ~*~Never Surrender~*~

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    Your writing is absolutly amazing. I'm getting choked up just from reading about it. Poor Sora...poor Kairi. I really didn't expect that from Sora, but it makes sense. I can't wait for the next chapter!

    PS- My update will probably be up today or tommorrow (probably today), in case you're wondering.
     
  9. Juicy Chaser

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    Hey, thanks. My writing has changed a lot since the beginning...

    Yay an update! Btw im going to start showing ur fic to other ppl, it deserves more publicity than it gets! And its super mega good *cheesy grin*
     
  10. P E A N U T ~*~Never Surrender~*~

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    Wow, thank you so much! That's REALLY REALLY nice of you. Say, you wanna be buddies?

    And yes, your writing has come so far since the beginning of the story. I can see why this fanfic is so popular =). You deserve every fan you have + more.
     
  11. Juicy Chaser

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    High five buddy :)

    aww you made me happy, not many ppl can do that *cheeses across the forum*
    oh im flattered *blushes* i never thought many ppl wud actually like this story...

    Get that new post out im dying to read it ;)

    *hugs*
     
  12. Roxas24Sora King's Apprentice

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    ObsessedWithSora, you never cease to amaze me, this is wonderful, gawd I hate that happened to Sora
     
  13. Juicy Chaser

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    *blushes* hey, thanks. Yeah, I hate what happened to him aswell. But my inner writer told me to put it in! Wasn't me , I swear! (he he he)
     
  14. ♦Demon♥Angel♦ Gummi Ship Junkie

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    No, it's very good thing. I love Mr. Valentine!!!
    IF SORA DIES I WILL KILL YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:guns4:
     
  15. Juicy Chaser

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    OH CRA-

    -NBERRIES

    erm... well you'll just have to see. *nervous cough*

    yay mr. valentine lovers high five xDDD



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  16. ♦Demon♥Angel♦ Gummi Ship Junkie

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    *rocaks out to the bacd again* Ok I'l wait. *highfivetheautherbecauseshecan*
     
  17. lolermee Traverse Town Homebody

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    I 'm back
    and i'm to late for the update :cryinganime:, but is is a good one :).
    I went WTF on the first part but that was a really good part.
    keep it up ObsessedWithSora
     
  18. daisydog2 Destiny Islands Resident

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    I really like this story so far! I won't scream at you like last time for the next update ,but when are u putting up the next chapter?
     
  19. Juicy Chaser

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    Oh man I haven't started writing chapter 20 yet, I need some good ideas.

    Btw people, the official end of the story will be after Riku's funeral. Just to say, this fic won't last forever *cries*

    Hmm i shall start tomorrow, okay ppl?



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  20. lolermee Traverse Town Homebody

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    question: is it me or do only girls and i come here and read the story???????