Okay. I just thought of this for the past two days. I think I have it pretty well layed out. This has nothing to do with KH, however. Its just a Story(Or Fairy Tale as my brother says). These are my versions, of how the DinoSaur age went. I doubt this'll work out, it seems no one likes to comment my stories. It makes me sad.. Great, Now I feel Emo, get me a three inch blade.. Anywho, its about two brothers, both Effigies(Latin for Ghost) trying to work out a life. Little do they know, their life may be ending soon... Their will be other characters, I'm trying to make this as realistic as possible. That means no talking. However maybe some thoughts, in english. CHARACTER SHEETS!- Name-Kyoushiro Age-Four Breed-Effigies Image/Description- His breed is an early relative of a Crocodile. He has somewhat of a look of a Velocirapter, though taller, and walks, by switching it weight from leg to leg, like a Teranosaurus(SP?). Kyou has dark brown circles, and stripes lined down his head to tail. And palish-tan skin. Sex-Male History- Kyoushiro, works with his brother, when hunting. He had grown up, by himself, but stayed with his brother. Both unable to find a Pack. Name-HaruTora Age-Five Breed-Effgies Image/Derscription- Tora has has dark black circles, and stripes lined down his head to tail, and the same as his brother he has the palish-Tan flesh, most Effigies, have. He unlike his brother has a scar across his snout, and on his hind right leg. Sex-Male History- Tora, works well with his Brother, and like Kyou, was unable to find a pack, after getting thrown off track by a sand storm. Name-Tomi Age-Six(Considered young since they live to about twenty four average) Breed-Compsognathus Image/Description-Tomi, is about Twenty four inches in height, however very deadly. He is the prey of the Effigies brothers, and doesn't have a problem getting away from them due to being so fall and able to fit in small fallen logs, and holes. He has a grayish brown skin, and thin, but sturdy legs which makes him so Agile. Sex-Male History-Tomi grew up in the forest, a couple miles from the desert. Stumbbling into many traps, by other pretators, he gets away due to having very clever thoughts. BackGrounds-This takes place, in the deserts, however their is a Rain forest near by. Every couple of months to Years, their will be severe thunderstorms, that cause massive landslides, and floods. Causing more troubles, with hunting. Time-Jurrasic Times Rating-PG-13-Violence, Death. Oh man,Please comment,I'm begging you, As for tomorrow I post the first Chapter.
Thank you. It makes me feel good, that I'm not wasting my time and at least one person will read it. CHAPTER ONE:THE FEARED BROTHERS. Winds gusted angirly, under a death black clouds. Two shadows ran across the sand. Thunder growled in the distance, as lightening lit up the sky. ~*~ A mountain, covered in weeds overlooked a desert hill. Formly known at the Flaming Mountains. Two brothers, walked up to the top of it. A click-like growl was given off from one of the brothers. It sounded deadly. This one had black stripes and spots lined down his back and the top of his skull, had given off the sound. A scar across his snout and leg, helped different him from the other. The other one, with same markings, but brown, spots and stripes, made a purring sound, but it rose to a low screech. The two jumped down from the cliff into the dried weeds, disappeared from sight. A mother sat over her nest in the sand along with the other mothers. One of the brothers, Harutora came foward at the mother distracting her. She got up trying to attack Harutora. Harutora gave off a hiss-like noise, and the other brother, with brown, Kyoushiro, came from behind grabbing an egg from the nest. The mother, saw Harutora run off, and sat back down on her nest, with a threatening call at Tora. However, she was unaware Kyou had stolen the other egg. The two brothers met by the Flamming mountain again to share their dinner, though it was quiet small. They had made it back in time, however. Light showers, started pelting the sand, but soon turned into death hits. The downpour caused sand on the side of Flamming Moutain to come down in a landslide, on the mothers. They looked up but disappeared quietly, under the landslide... The brothers stood up calling at eachother, as if saying. Lets go, brother! We need to get out of this! The two stood up and headed for the nearest tree to hide-out under. ~*~ A little shadow bounced around under trees with water falling through. Four other creatures a couple centimeters taller than the creature is was chasing, bounded behind the Grayish tan skin colored creature. One of the four caught up behind it, and snapped its tail missing by far too much. The Compsognathus, leaped onto a fallen branch and onto higher land, as its presuers went to leap on a huge ground-shaking, river of mud came sweeiping through the small valley the Compsognathus was being chased. Its persuers, drowned instantly. The small chicken sized creature clicked, with triumph. Roshi always wins. The small thing apparently called Roshi thought, and almost looked as if smiling in a impressed way. He jumped off, happily, the ran still poured down, but survivers knew this meant "good". As the sun came up the next morning, thin puddles of pure water sat rolling farther down, making a ankle deep ocean. Harutora looked up, and stood up, making a purring sound, and his brother opened his eyes, and stood up. We need to get something to eat.. Harutora thought looking down the hill and walked down and quickly started to slide down. He stopped with two jumps, and looked at his reflection in the water, a low purring growl came from the back of his throat. As if question. Kyoushiro skid down by his brother. He tilted his head at the reflection. They knew it was just reflection, it was just weird to see now, at the time. Kyoushiro started to drink the water, however. It was still good. Harutora looked at his brother and also started to drink the water, as the sun looked down on the two brothers. END OF CHAPTER ONE!
Oh, I like that chapter. That's a good start off. I just hope everyone will understand that they are animals.
