Traditional Art •Sheik•

Okay, first off, this is not finished, but I wanted some pointers. So please comment with your opinions!




CnC

P.S. Sorry about the large size.

 

The left lock of hair looks kinda like you messed up on it a bit. The headgear is somewhat lopsided and doesn't really have proper physics. Other than those minor details it looks fine. Get rid of the top one though it's the same as the bottom one but with lower quality I see no reason to leave it up as well.

 

That's pretty cool! It could use some adjustments, but other than that it's great! :)

 

Not bad. im sure it'll look awesome with colouring in it :D

 

I knew there was something wrong with the head, I just couldn't figure it out, I will fix that, along with the hair. Thanks for the tips!

Thank you both, and I will color it....sometime. I need to finish first. XD

 

Can you darken the body? I like the head except the bandages look like they're on too tight.Overall, good job so far! :3

 

The body is not finished yet. And I will work on the head, and thank you!

 

No problem, :3

 

From what you can see of the body, does it look okay?

 

I can't see. It's too bright.

 

Drat. Well thanks anyway. lol.

 

No problem. :3

 

The body looks pretty good from what i can see, but it is hard to see.

then once your finished and everything we can all give even more of this useless CnC lol.

but at the head, this is kinda contradicting what someone else said, i think the bandages look actually loose O.o

 

I think the hair looks a bit too solid. Try to make it more linear by adding more strokes around that area. That kinda brings up the "hairy" effect. Otherwise, hurry and finish it up. ^^

Also, Shiek didn't wear a bandage like thing on his/her (I still can't figure it out :P) head did he? Oo

 

The head looks a bit disfigured. Other than that, it looks fine.

 

Yes, he did wear a bandage type thing. See:

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BTW, that is the picture I based my drawing off of.

Also, I don't know when I will be able to finish, October is a very busy month for me.

 

Oh yea, he does have that bandage thing. :P

Anyways, keep up the work.

 

i like it, nice and simple

 

wow~
That's pretty cool art~ :3

 

Hmm, very close. But, isn't there more hair in his bangs? Like, split off?