Scarred Nobody

Hey, I got some kinda bad news. I am exhausted. I need sleep. Badly. I'll set an alarm for 8:00, PST. That's an hour and a half from now. I'll try to be on then. If you guys aren't on, then it's my loss, I guess. xP Well, later!

tummer, go to my new album. It's called "Fan-Fiction Pictures," or something like that. Do it! Do it as soon as you get on!

Okay, but if you still want to write it with vampires then don't let me stop you. Like I said, this is for fun, so it shouldn't really matter what others think of it anyways. As long as you have a good time writing it, then who cares?

Well you could always remake it anyways, just like take it down and rewrite it completely if you want. But if you want to continue with the vampire thing, then you should. It's just for fun anyways.

Yep, that's what I was trying to say. That's why I reread my stuff so many times. I know that there will always be mistakes.

You're style's not bad, but it would definitely improve with proof reading. It could use some fine tuning, but again, it's not bad. I am slightly hesitant to say I'd continue reading, not because of your writing style, but because I'm kind of really super duper sick of vampires. If it were a different subject, then I would most likely want to continue, but... I'm just so sick of vampires D:

Yeah. Usually, I'll write for a while, and then stop and take a break, sometimes for half an hour, sometimes for a few days. Then when I come back I scroll up and read from the beginning of the chapter, not only to catch mistakes, but also to get back into the mood I was in/re-establish the train of thought I'd had while writing the chapter. Then I'll write some more, take another break, and so on and so forth.

THEN once I've finished the chapter, I'll re-read the entire chapter, sometimes right after I've finished, and sometimes after another break. Then I'll take a break (again, ranging anywhere from half an hour to a few days) and come back and read the entire thing, starting from chapter one, just to make sure it all flows.

Only then do I feel like it's ready to post.

Okay, I'm glad you understand, I'm just trying to help :)

Even if you had Word, I would recommend that you don't rely on it, because it can often miss things. For my fanfics, I usually proof read a chapter about three times before posting it. You'll find mistakes each and every time, and you'll be able to do a lot of fine tuning when you proof read multiple times.

Yes, I did. It was pretty good, but there were a lot of errors. Not just spelling and grammar either. For example, "I could tell by Ken's attitude that he was more of a follewer than a leader and Ken was his king." I... do not understand this sentence at all. Who's the follower?? Stuff like that had me sort of confused.

Also, I feel like... I dunno, like vampires have been done to death by this point, and especially when you mentioned Twilight at the end it was kind of like overkill.

But it's not that bad. I'm just telling you what I truly thought so that you can improve. I may be a nice person, but when it comes to critiquing stuff, I do not necessarily tell people what they want to hear, but what they need to hear in order to improve. I'm sorry if this is not the response you wanted :(

I CAN'T!! I'M WORKING, NO TIME FOR SKYPE, NOT FOR ANOTHER THREE WEEKS!! :(

Okay, you'd better!!

D: I did what??

Wah!! Whyyy didn't you get her email address?!?!

I added you into Spam Wars...

I understand.don't worry!

Okay dude..that's cool...

Welcome to Spam Wars

Hey T..what's up?

Are you into RP's..if so..

Mind joining this one?
http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?p=2687262#post2687262

It's not completely done yet..but...

Is the story of the book the same as the story of the anime/manga? I've yet to ever laugh at a book's writing, but if it's the same plot as the anime/manga, I could definitely see myself having a nice hearty lol at that book.

OH. MY. GOD. I ****ing hated that book. I read the first five pages and just completely refused to go on. Probably because on all five of those pages, that hack of an author just described how a bunch of guys were standing in front of a freaking door. Spark Notes saved my ****ing life with that one. I actually started watching Haruhi, I like it, even though I've only seen the first ep. xD

Oh God, it was probably insanely boring. Usually if I can't stand a book to the point that I can't read it, I'll just Spark Note it. Pretty much a guaranteed 80 unless your teacher is a ****** and does a quote quiz or something.

Not too much, man. Reading a book for school... which has a shirtless man on the cover... Ooooh God...

You?

Okay :)

Lol what?? No! That's just you eating pizza together! Even if you buy it for her, that is by no means a date. A date is when the two of you set a specific time and date and go out together. Boys often make that mistake, and that leads to you thinking that the relationship is farther along than it actually is and causes you to move a lot faster than she's expecting. If you count stuff like that as dates, then when she thinks your on date #2, you might be under the impression that you're on date #4 and try and kiss her, and she may be like "Wtf we've only had two date!!" and run away.

BUT that's still a nice thing to do. It's a good way to get to know her better. BUT IT IS NOT A DATE. That would be a good time to set up a date though.

Well, it's good that you named him after me. I was in foster care, I like Goth girls... Can't you see?! 'Twas fate that made you name him such!