Beucefilous

xD
Cool

Then I suppose I was wrong...Maybe.
hehe, Myab,I have come up with another Crazy explanation. I await its failure.

no, just flippin cracked out of a 4 chocolate shake and gatorade

But you were.
I wonder what It'll be like when you two meet.
Awkward maybe.
If I ever met Ven or Kairi I'd be awkward xD.
I'd take like 20 seconds in between every sentence Unless I just yell out Random stuff like with Kairi xD

Anyway, What did her mom ever say?
And aren't you supposed to meet her in like March?

Believe me, this story was bad. Alright, here was the basic plotline:

A wizard from so long ago that no one even remembers his country, sends four giant gems into different times in the future, hoping that some hero will find it and come save his country from... I never even decided what kind of danger his country was in. These four stones end up one in medieval times, to be picked up by a knight who stinks at being a knight so badly that the people of a town sent him to fight a dragon just so that they would be rid of him when the dragon ate him. One is sent to the revolutionary war, and is picked up by a ditzy nineteen year old girl who can't for the life of her catch a husband. One is sent to the old west, picked up by a cowboy who accidentally forgot to tie his horse up the night before so he was out looking for it when a band of deperados raided his wagon train, and one was sent to modern times, and was picked up by a woman who's family was just killed in a fire, and she just so happens to be eight months pregnant.

That by itself isn't even as bad as the writing. Even when I was writing it, I knew that it was bad. Horrible sentence structure, hard to read diolague, long run-on paragraphs that rambled and served no real purpose in the story. Badly written descriptive passages and unsuccessful attempts at witty banter between characters. The characters themselves had no depth at all, the wise wizard, the bumbling knight, the ditzy blonde, the rough and tough cowboy, and the greiving mother. I tried to give it some romance by making the ditzy blonde fall in love with the cowboy, but that just made everything worse. It was, by far, the worst thing I have ever tried to write.

Yeah XD
lol nope

well thyenhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D1UOJXMM8fc

Haha xD

You,Un-Happy?
No,I'd sooner watch LotR which I promised myself I'd never watch for fear I might actually like it.

For whatever reason you were un-happy is not true,If that makes any sense.
Hehe xD

me ninja penguin throwing a shirikin/star thingy into my face
why? cuz that is the ultimate way to die

You confuse me .

if you had to die, how and why

XD you and your pics lol

OKAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY ninja penguins

Oh no, it was awful. I know that I can be a bit of a perfectionist at times, but that was just bad. Pus, I was only eleven at the time. How many eleven year olds can write a good fantasy novel?

Hm,Why ?

Hey,What's up?

I knew that ^^

[IMG] so i auto-win

XD id say so :D

Its pal isn't it? :lolface: