Traditional Art Zexion =D

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  1. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    Wow, i've been drawing lots lately x_x


    Here ya go =D


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    I know his hair isn't blue but thats the closest I've got
     
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    lol emo. Nice job on the hair but yeah the color is a bit off :P
     
  3. Dredica SNES was the best.

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    Thats good, just the lips, they look at little 'off' but that's all.
     
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    ZOMFG!

    it's the hair again!!1

    Dx


    lub it!!!!
     
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    OMG!

    The hair is really good!

    but, as said somewhere above, the lips do look a bit off but other than that, sweet drawing!
     
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    Very nice, but I agree with Roxma. His skin is yellow.
     
  7. Doukuro Chaser

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    who doesn't like yellow skin? xD

    It's awesome but the coloring...I have to agree with the rest. But you manage to keep Zexion's semxiness xD
     
  8. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    I'ma try it again :P

    No coloring this time tho
     
  9. Doukuro Chaser

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    I bet it would look still awesome or better
     
  10. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    mmkay I'm finished

    I'll post it soon


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    here it is

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  11. Sanda Kingdom Keeper

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    Oh I love both versions. I kinda like the blue hair!! He looks fine with it (provided it isn't in a cosplay haha) but aside from the lips it is very very nice! I'd love to see a full body shot of him lovie<3

    Keep up the fabulous work~
     
  12. Doukuro Chaser

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    It's very nice! I love them both!
     
  13. Dredica SNES was the best.

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    His hair is MUCH better blue if you ask me.
     
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    Nice Sarah =D They're both great n_n lol now if only I could draw. But at least you and Sanda are awesome n_n :p Great job! |*_*| SIDEBURNS
     
  15. Cin Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp

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    The first version is better then the second, by far, but it still isn't that great either. The colors are off, and yes I know you said youd idn't have the colors, but a real artist creates their own colors from what they have. The only real advice I can give you is TRY MAKING YOUR OWN STUFF, reference is great and all, but we can't really know how good/bad you are until you try making your own work. All I've seen of you so far is referenced work, and quite frankly none of them are that great. You need to quit being afraid to go dark. Rinoa's hair is dark brown, L's hair is black, Zexion's cloak is black, you've done little more then light gray. You need to try working on shade and color variation, as well as consistency when it comes to detail and outlines. The main reason why the second version is worse thent he first is because the lips look 10x smaller then they're supposed to, and the outline for them is TINY in contrast to the rest of the drawing, where the outlines are thick and dark.

    You have potential Cupcake, but you have a LOT of work to do, despite allt he lies these people are spewing out.
     
  16. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    I really do appreciate your criticism Cin <3

    Thats exactly what i needed to hear

    I'm not entirely sure how to make my own stuff. Refrences allow me to see where i draw at and suchforth, if its in my head it'll come up different.

    Thanks Cin <3
     
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    nice job! i luv the hair it must have been hard to draw it
     
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    I do agree with what Cin said; it is much more fun and better to practice doing your own work. Trust me, it is actually easier!! So don't be afraid of it. Just look at real people's bodies to see shapes and muscles and definition and you'll be fine. It's what I do (not that I have skills or anything) but it has helped me get a better idea of what people look like. I really hate using reference pictures myself. Sometimes I'll base something off of a picture I saw once (like maybe an aspect or two) but as a general rule using pictures never helps me. My stuff looks so much worse with them D:
     
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    ok uhmm in the first one only one thing i saw wronge but (if that is his collor bone, or if it's his tendons... i cant tell >.>) but if it is his color bone it is a little high....
     
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    That is very good.Just maybe work on the lips and thats all :)