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  1. K.H.Nut13 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Alright, I wanted to write a story about Kingdom Hearts but couldn't come up with any good characters. The First post will get to be the main character in the story I'll type and post here.

    Rules:
    1.Please no cussing.
    2.No spamming.
    thats pretty mutch it for now. Post quickly!

    I am now listing the characters so that I don't forget them.
    CHARACTERS:
    Ranax
    Rako
    Rage
    Raxtion
    Damax
    Christy
    Luxie
    Kyra
    Guardius

    If I have forgotten a character, just let me know!
     
  2. Way2Dawn Traverse Town Homebody

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    Well, first of all whats the plot and setting. That might make it easier for people to come up with characters. And if you want any spacific genders you should probably say so.
     
  3. K.H.Nut13 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Just come up with a character and I'll type the story!
     
  4. Way2Dawn Traverse Town Homebody

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    Ranax, a bounty hunter hired to kill sora.
     
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    Wrong section, hun. ;) Ask a mod to move it.
     
  6. K.H.Nut13 Traverse Town Homebody

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    CHAPTER ONE

    Ranax headed into the sandiot of Twilight Town. He held a black suitcase and wore a black shirt and white pants. He looked to see if his client was here..yes, there he was. a guy that had an eyepatch over his left eye and whitish hair that he wore in a ponytail.Ranax ran up to him an smiled stealtily."Are you Xigbar?" he asked. "Yup." Xigbar replied. "And your Ranax, right?" "Yes sir, now, who did you want me to take out that was so important that I had to come here?" he asked, lowering his voice. "I need you to take out a certin fellow by the name of Sora." Xigbar replied. "Here's a picture of him. Now if you hit him, clean and good, you will get paid very well. Sora is usualy found either here or Hollow Bastion." Xigbar ordered, handing Renax a picture of a guy that was dressed in black and had a key-like weapon. "I guess that concludes our buissness here." Xigbar said and dissapered in a black portal. Ranax put the picture in his pocket. "Well, Ranax what have you gotten yourself into this time?" he mumbled to himselve. Ranex left the sandiot and headed to where his blue and red gummi ship was parked. he entered it and headed to Holllow Bastion.
     
  7. Way2Dawn Traverse Town Homebody

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    That was very good. I can't believe that was all based off of my character.:)
     
  8. K.H.Nut13 Traverse Town Homebody

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    CHAPTER 2
    Ranax flew past many Heartless ships, and blew a few up before landing in the market square of the town. Just his luck, he saw the person that was in the photo that Xigbar had given him! "Alright, Sora." Ranax mumbled to himself,"Your mine!" He quickly opened his suitcase and pulled out a black sword. Moveing quickly, but quietly, Ranax got behind Sora and had just gotten the sword postioned right behind Sora's back when suddenly..
    Sora turned around. "Umm..Hi?" Sora said, drawing out the weapon that looked like a big key. "Who the heck are you?" Sora yelled, thrusting his weapon downward and parrying Ranax's downward thrust. "I'm Ranax. What type of blade is that?" he shouted, dodeging one of Sora's upward blows. "This is a Keyblade." Sora anwsered. Ranax smiled. He could tell that this guy was a good swordfighter. This was going to be fun. "Well, Sora I have to kill you, one way or another." Ranax smirked, and smaked the unwary Sora while he was listening to Ranax. Ranax was about to finish him off, but he heard someone. "Sora!" Ranax growled and dissapered into a purple portal.
     
  9. Way2Dawn Traverse Town Homebody

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    It's really good, you should transfer it to the creativity corner and then PM me when you do.:D
     
  10. K.H.Nut13 Traverse Town Homebody

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    OOC: Well, first I'll have to finish it. :)

    CHAPTER THREE
    True, Ranax used the darkness, but he didn't see anything wrong with it. To him, it was just another way to move around quickly and to have more power to take out pepole faster. Ranax sighed. "Man, this guy ain't gonna last long if dosn't get his sword skills polished." He then telaported himself to Twilight Town. "Might as well check to see if he'll come here." He mumbled to himself. As he moved aimlessly around the tram common, he wondered where he could live while he tried to take out Sora. Ranax passed a bulliten board and saw a red sheet that went like this:

    ROOM FOR RENT! 10 MUNNY PER MONTH! SANDIOT, LONG HOUSE.
    Ranax tore off the sheet and ran to the Sandiot. Where was the long house..? There! Ranax ran to the door and pounded on it. A fat man with a mustache wearing a blue shirt and black pants opened the door. "I guess your here for the room. Would you-" "Just let me rent it please." Ranax cut him off. "Sure thing kid. Just sign here." He held up a paper and Ranax signed it withought even looking at it.
    This was his room now.
     
  11. daxma Hei Long: Unrivalled under the Heavens

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    I'm doing something like that too which kinda intertwines with the KH Story.I've got like 24 pages and i've hardly started.Just sit down and leave your mind wander through the possabilities.it'll come to you.Do it during classes you sleep through.I sleep through english,History and after school study within the school(2 hours of pure torture).You wouldn't believe how much you get done.Plus it helps to think about cool things you wish KH characters could do.
    P.S:Can i please be a character in this RPG.
     
  12. K.H.Nut13 Traverse Town Homebody

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    OOC: Sure! Come up with a character and I'll add it in, Daxma!
    CHAPTER 4
    Ranax ran from his room and telported to Hollow Bastion to see if he could find Sora again. He got to the market square, but there was no sign of him. He then went deeper into the town an looked. No Sora. Ranax decided to ask someone if they had seen him. He saw a guy that had a cut on his face that was wearing a black jacket, a white shirt and black pants. The guy was also wearing a lion necklace. "Excuse me, sir?" the guy turned around. "The name is Leon." Leon replied. "What do you want?" "I was wondering if you have seen a guy named Sora around here." Leon stared at him for a moment, then his eyes flashed with anger. "Sora discribed you perfectly, kid. Your that assasin that tried to kill him!" Leon pulled out his gunblade and Ranax pulled out his sword. Leon did sideways blows for the first few steps that he took, but Ranax dodged them all, and sent a dark cannon his way that hit him square in the chest. Leon went flying and banged into a wall. "Ouch.." Leon panted. Ranax smiled. The dark cannons were not only powerfull, but they also took away the persons strength. Ranax pulled out a gun, and pointed it at Leon. "Tell me where Sora is and I'll spare your life." "H-he's in the Dark Depths." Leon managed to gasp out. "Thanks." Ranax shot him anyway straight in the head. Leon was dead. Ranax hurried to the Dark Depths.
     
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    CHAPTER 5
    Ranax ran past many strange scuptures and finally got to the Dark Depths. There Sora was! Alone too. Ranax pulled out his gun and aimed for Sora's head. He fired, but it only hit his leg. Blood shot everywhere. Sora turned around and saw him. "You again!" He pulled out his keyblade and went after Ranax. Ranax fired his gun again. It hit Sora in the chest. He fell to the ground, dead. Ranax went up to the dead corpse and smirked, but when he did, a yellow light enveloped him.When it died down in his hand was Sora keyblade! "What the-" Ranax yelled. He didn't want it! Xigbar appeared out of nowhere in front of him. "Well, you did a good job, but there's one problem. I'm on a mission too. I have to kill anyone who has the keyblade."

    CHAPTER 6
    "So that means.." Ranax looked at the keyblade in his hand and realized that Xigbar meant to kill him. Xigbar pulled out his guns. "The only thing left to do is make your Nobodie join us." Ranax had no idea what that meant, but he wasn't sticking around. He quickly ran away from Xigbar, but he apperared right in front of him. "Sorry, kiddo." Xigbar started to fire at will, and Ranax tried to dodge the bullets. He finally got behind a rock and started to fire back. 'I might have to use the darkness..' he thought to himself.

    CHAPTER 7
    Ranax fired more rounds, but Xigbar either avoided them or he got hit and the bullet did nothing. Ranax finally decided to use a dark cannon. He put away his gun and build up the darkness inside him. When it was at his highest point, he fired and hit Xigbar in the chest. "Urggh..nice hit,kid." Xigbar said, but it was obvious that Xigbar wasn't damaged that mutch. 'What am I going to do now?' Ranax thought. Then it hit him! He dissapered in a purple portal and left Xigbar there, alone.
     
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    WOW!!! These just keep getting better and better. Now Ranax is a keyblade bearer. Can't wait for the next post!
     
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    CHAPTER 8
    Ranax landed in Twilight Town. He breathed sighs of happyiness for getting away, but he had a feeling that Xigbar wasn't going to give up on killing him. What he needed was training, and lots of it. He wandered around town until he saw a poster reading STRUGGLE TORAMENT!! COME TOMMOROW AT 8 a.m!!
    Ranax finally had the anwser to his problem. He headed to his rented house and got some sleep.
     
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    i was wondering if i could be in the rpg too?
     
  17. K.H.Nut13 Traverse Town Homebody

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    OOC: Sure! Come up with a character and I'll write about it.
     
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    ok, hm...i know and i hope it's okay
    Luxie- A lost member of Organization XIII. Her name was the Blinded Star and a long-time friend of Roxas and Axel
     
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    CHAPTER 9
    Ranax woke up and ran to the sandiot. He found a large group of peopole there and quickly ran up to the arena to avoid being chrused. The announcer came up. "Ladies and gentleman, here is the first round of the struggle tornement! Ranax against Luxie!" A pink haired girl wearing a black robe came up to the arena. The anouncer left the stage and the fight was one. But before Ranax could do anything, Luxie got close to his ear and whispered, "I have to kill you. I'm with the organazation."
     
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    whoa this is getting exciting. you're good^-^
     
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