Just a quick drawing I did using a tablet this morning in class since I got bored. He's just an RP OC I came up with.
His face looks like a horse o.o. Push the forehead forward along with the eye. I'm not sure why the shading for the skin is.. pink. It rather should be a darker shade of the skin, 'cause the pink makes it look lighter and as if he has a disease.
I think the pink skin could be a little lighter. Also the nose, chin, and mouth are too far forward. You should try to line them up with the forehead (the nose can be longer or shorter). The hairline is a little flat and unnatural looking, and the forehead has this weird curve coming out from the hairline. I do like the eyes though ^.^