Traditional Art Xion, the 14th of the Org

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Cocohints, Oct 15, 2008.

  1. Cocohints "Up to now, the most discussed topic is global war

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    Clickaey hereh.

    She's cute, altho... kinda emo? I won't repeat myself over what I wrote on DA. X3 I don't like the outcome of the last headview. >>

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  2. Scott Pilgrim Banned

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    Okay, for a character that just came out with not alot of reference to work with, that's awesome! I can't say anything more. It looks exactly like her. Add color next time and I will officially be impressed.
     
  3. Cocohints "Up to now, the most discussed topic is global war

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    I'd add colour if my laptop wasn't in a coma. ;> But thanks.
     
  4. Jiku Neon Kingdom Keeper

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    Pretty decent. I won't venture to say it's incredible or anything but I like it. The only thing I've gotta give the not so awesome stamp is the top one where I don't like the way the hair falls and the expression. The hair seems slightly off, not wrong, just not quite spot on. The expression seems pained, I'm not sure if that's intentional or not but it really looks kinda odd to me. But like I said I really like this overall.
     
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    Hmm I kind of agree, but the pained expression seems fitting, as in the trailer she appears distraught etc.

    Its very good though, coco <3

    *is jealous*
     
  6. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    I love this coco, especially the 'annoyed' expression.
    And since you didn't have that many references this makes it even better in my eyes.
    The last headshot/headview or whatever it's called isn't that great, but it's still good.

    Great job, coco. <3
     
  7. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    Commented on the pic coco. :3 My username is there and you can tell if it's me by looking at one of those two people's sigs.
     
  8. Cocohints "Up to now, the most discussed topic is global war

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    Thanks guys, I appreciate each and every thing you can give me in your feedbacks. *annoyed expression ftw*

    You're both right, it was intended to make her look like she was forced into doing something she didn't want to do, I asume fighting Axel would fit that category. If you watch the video you'll see how she was behaving in that scene, that was what I was trying to go for. It still was weird trying to draw that style tho lol, I'm not used to it. And I have always sucked hard with short hair. XD

    Of course it's not great, that one I am ashamed of showing you guys. XD The whole point with is was to show how I think her hair style is meant to look like, but even that failed. X3

    Cloud and Zack, SOLDIER style - I noticed that you posted that you have posted in their deviations whenever it's people who submit something on DA. :3 That's cute.
     
  9. HOSPITAL STAT! i knock tits

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    "Totally result of Zexion & Aqua"

    NOMURA LIKES HIS CHARACTER-MATING, THAT HE DOES!

    Yup, this is pretty good, but to expand on the top image and her expression - her facial features don't seem to be placed/handled correctly - which is probably why it doesn't look as convincing as the other sketches. Either her face is to wide (along with the eyes being to spaced out) or something else I can't pinpoint.
     
  10. Maka Albarn It's called love

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    I like it! She looks really cute in the drawing and I like the shadings in it. :) I can't see the errors in it at all. It's nice. :D Good job!
     
  11. Cocohints "Up to now, the most discussed topic is global war

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    That's true.. I suppose since she is a young character + kinda having her face down yet eyes looking up, the face is meant to be chubbier caused by the angle. Now that I look at it, I feel that the left eye should be shortened in with at least a little bit but too late for that. XD

    THAT HE DOES! >:3