Several new random drawings; My organization character: http://rikurep.deviantart.com/art/Raxen-Superior-70573273 and http://rikurep.deviantart.com/art/Kid-Icarus-70570115 http://rikurep.deviantart.com/art/Marluxia-Sarxalis-70570980
*hopes you want cnc.... >>;;* I really digg your lines - you certainly seem to have control over them, especially for the outfits. There's minor issues with body propotions tho - sometimes the hips seem too wide (wide like the upper chest), maybe make those a tiny amount slimmer for the males. *I'm mainly looking at Raxen there* You could also add a bit more muscle on his right arm/shoulder, it seemed too close to the upper body. For Kid Icarus, the feet at the bottom turned out really.. square-like. At the edge of the toes they would be more / like, I don't know what the English word for this is.. (no dictionary around atm, sorry) You should also give a hint that there's a joint in his knees (the skeleton is close to the flesh right in this area), just a tiny line in the bottom corner of the joint is enough. And let me just say this right now - I totally digg the story concept you have for Kid Icarus! :D *that's some higly detailed outfit, man!* For Sarxalis, her arms are a tiny amount too short between the joints - I'd want them to get some more lenght. Her hips are OK, though (this is completly up to your preferences) you could slim them up some, so that she gets a more hourglass (or martini glass, whichever) shape to the female body. (I don't know if Marluxia is supposed to have short hair in this battle - in the Org anyway it is longer) There's this funky area to Marluxia's right that confuses me - something is missing, the rest of the body. Though it may end up as Lexaeus' muscular body feature. These are all very good drawings! And I understand that there's few changes that can be done if you used ink for the lines, though it doesn't hurt keeping some crit in mind for your next drawing.
Yeah I've always had problems with proportions, especially female bodies. Thanks alot for the critique and the comment about the Kid Icarus one
